Reviews for More Than Words
azab chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
i loved it
mazeru chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
lol, good. Very suggestive at the end But once more... short
SamCyberCat chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
I've been interested to see how you'd have these two characters interact with each other since you said you'd chosen them for a 1sentence challenge once. I have to say it's much more different than I expected it to be, but in a good way. It was so calm between them and interesting to see that they were both on a completely different track most of the time. Also I've needed Saiou fics lately so this fed that. I can imagine how Fubuki would have reacted if Saiou had answered differently.
Serpent at Sunset chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
Perfect characterizations and reactions here. Here, Fubuki's more serious and Saiou's more likeable if that's possible. The shortness doesn't take away from the effect a bit.