|Reviews for Healing Presence|
| Rugrat247 chapter 6 . 6/17/2009
I think I know what he's up to. o So cute! But... he broke his promise. That little ...promise-breaker. XD
Correcting my last review, I just remembered that he's 5'11. Not 5'10. Woah! Even taller! o.O
| Rugrat247 chapter 5 . 6/10/2009
Haha. Marik humour FTW! I laughed at their conversation about height and marriage. So cute!
I'm guessing you began Jeweler sometime close after this?
I like Marik being tall. Woah. I was curious and measured 5'10, which is what he's supposed to be at 16 (like you wouldn't know XD) AND HE WAS FREAKING TALL THEN!
| Rugrat247 chapter 4 . 6/7/2009
Good chapter. Poor Marik! That's so cute, though. Trying to make it last foreve. :[ aww...
Poor Mhera, too. I wouldn't want Marik yelling at me. That'd be terrifying!
| Rugrat247 chapter 3 . 6/6/2009
Great chapter. I like. :3
Your poor brother. I'm glad he got better.
Ouchy. I've burnt myself twice this weekend; both times when pooring boiling water into my hottie. Boy it stings.
I think I can understand where both Marik and Mhera and coming from with the whole clumsiness thing. Marik's worried. Aww. o He's such a cute dad, even though he's deceitful, stubborn and sometimes selfish at times. XD
"Once I started writing, I usually didn’t stop until satisfied with my work." Are you partially referring to yourself here? I thought that as soon as I read that part. XD
| Rugrat247 chapter 2 . 6/6/2009
Aww. I really want them to hug. I think that'd be so cute!
I can't blame Mhera for her burst at her father. What he did is very hard to forgive. Poor Mhera. And, of course, poor Marik.
| Rugrat247 chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
Very good. Short. But good. _
I love the bed and Marik's ego comment. XD
Poor Marik! It's even worse that he's stubborn with treatment.
| The Whispering Wind chapter 3 . 3/20/2009
This was a great chapter. I don't know why, but this story hits me in a way I can't explain. I feel every single thing Mheralo feels and then some. I felt like I was her when reading this chapter. I don't know if others feel the same way I do, or if it's just my take on it. Either way, I still love your writing
| Ghost Wulf chapter 12 . 3/15/2009
Aw, sad. But the comfort part was cute at the same time.
| searing light dragon chapter 12 . 3/13/2009
Good chapter. Spoliers are helpful and I enjoyed them as well.
-searing light dragon
| Kelekiah Galadrian chapter 12 . 3/12/2009
No! Spoilers! Icky! Oh well, I guess I'll have to get over it XP I hate spoilers 'cause then Wulf-chan gets extremely angry with me XP
Mheralo has a strange relationship with Marik, but, at the same time, it's kinda kool.
Awesome job! Update soon!
| journey maker chapter 12 . 3/10/2009
I love how Marik tries to soothe Mheralo fears, and how she tries to comfort him. It's such a beautiful story of the love between a father and his daughter. I love this story. Please update when you can..
| Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 12 . 3/10/2009
Ooh, I still love the references to Marik talking about being Rare Hunters, and Mhera not being effected in the same way...
Ah, and Marik's sixth sense is as sharp as ever...
| moonstar274 chapter 12 . 3/10/2009
That's so sad. I loved it! Great chapter! Oh, and thanks for letting me know you updated, I appriciate it! Great work, please update soon! (
| PsychopathicPrincess chapter 12 . 3/10/2009
oh wow that is sad :(
still its sweet that he gets out of bed to comfort her even though he is sick
can't wait to read more
update soon :D
| The Whispering Wind chapter 2 . 2/15/2009
I love the whole idea of this fanfiction. You also capture the pains of healing and broken trust, along with the binding relationship of family members, so well. I can even relate to Mheralo!
Hmm. I can't think of any diseases, but if I do I'll tell you. That is, unless you have already figured it out by now.