Reviews for Healing Presence
Rugrat247 chapter 6 . 6/17/2009
I think I know what he's up to. o So cute! But... he broke his promise. That little ...promise-breaker. XD

Correcting my last review, I just remembered that he's 5'11. Not 5'10. Woah! Even taller! o.O
Rugrat247 chapter 5 . 6/10/2009
Haha. Marik humour FTW! I laughed at their conversation about height and marriage. So cute!

I'm guessing you began Jeweler sometime close after this?

I like Marik being tall. Woah. I was curious and measured 5'10, which is what he's supposed to be at 16 (like you wouldn't know XD) AND HE WAS FREAKING TALL THEN!
Rugrat247 chapter 4 . 6/7/2009
Good chapter. Poor Marik! That's so cute, though. Trying to make it last foreve. :[ aww...

Poor Mhera, too. I wouldn't want Marik yelling at me. That'd be terrifying!
Rugrat247 chapter 3 . 6/6/2009
Great chapter. I like. :3

Your poor brother. I'm glad he got better.

Ouchy. I've burnt myself twice this weekend; both times when pooring boiling water into my hottie. Boy it stings.

I think I can understand where both Marik and Mhera and coming from with the whole clumsiness thing. Marik's worried. Aww. o He's such a cute dad, even though he's deceitful, stubborn and sometimes selfish at times. XD

"Once I started writing, I usually didn’t stop until satisfied with my work." Are you partially referring to yourself here? I thought that as soon as I read that part. XD
Rugrat247 chapter 2 . 6/6/2009
Aww. I really want them to hug. I think that'd be so cute!

I can't blame Mhera for her burst at her father. What he did is very hard to forgive. Poor Mhera. And, of course, poor Marik.
Rugrat247 chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
Very good. Short. But good. _

I love the bed and Marik's ego comment. XD

Poor Marik! It's even worse that he's stubborn with treatment.
The Whispering Wind chapter 3 . 3/20/2009
This was a great chapter. I don't know why, but this story hits me in a way I can't explain. I feel every single thing Mheralo feels and then some. I felt like I was her when reading this chapter. I don't know if others feel the same way I do, or if it's just my take on it. Either way, I still love your writing
Ghost Wulf chapter 12 . 3/15/2009
Aw, sad. But the comfort part was cute at the same time.

~ Wulf
searing light dragon chapter 12 . 3/13/2009
Good chapter. Spoliers are helpful and I enjoyed them as well.

-searing light dragon
Kelekiah Galadrian chapter 12 . 3/12/2009
No! Spoilers! Icky! Oh well, I guess I'll have to get over it XP I hate spoilers 'cause then Wulf-chan gets extremely angry with me XP

Mheralo has a strange relationship with Marik, but, at the same time, it's kinda kool.

Awesome job! Update soon!

~Kelekiah Galadrian
journey maker chapter 12 . 3/10/2009
I love how Marik tries to soothe Mheralo fears, and how she tries to comfort him. It's such a beautiful story of the love between a father and his daughter. I love this story. Please update when you can..
Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 12 . 3/10/2009
Ooh, I still love the references to Marik talking about being Rare Hunters, and Mhera not being effected in the same way...

Ah, and Marik's sixth sense is as sharp as ever...
moonstar274 chapter 12 . 3/10/2009
That's so sad. I loved it! Great chapter! Oh, and thanks for letting me know you updated, I appriciate it! Great work, please update soon! (
PsychopathicPrincess chapter 12 . 3/10/2009
oh wow that is sad :(

still its sweet that he gets out of bed to comfort her even though he is sick

can't wait to read more

update soon :D
The Whispering Wind chapter 2 . 2/15/2009
I love the whole idea of this fanfiction. You also capture the pains of healing and broken trust, along with the binding relationship of family members, so well. I can even relate to Mheralo!

Hmm. I can't think of any diseases, but if I do I'll tell you. That is, unless you have already figured it out by now.
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