|Reviews for Healing Presence|
| Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 7 . 5/3/2008
Oh, this is a great chapter! Poor Marik... that place meant so much to him and Filiron...
Oh, and yay for Tea's relative! I'll definitely be looking forward to finding out who she is!
| KolaByNikola chapter 6 . 4/29/2008
I am quite curious to see what Marik is up to... :)
| Kelekiah Galadrian chapter 6 . 4/15/2008
Hmm... I wonder what Marik is up to... Great job with this chapter. Man, how old is Mhera in this story? If you told me before, then I don't remember. She seems slightly older in this story. Anyway, it was a good chapter. Good luck with future chapters!
| PsychopathicPrincess chapter 6 . 4/9/2008
lol he still sneaks out
the code is hard i'm still trying to figure out how you came up with it
can't wait to read more
| Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 6 . 4/9/2008
Ooh, wow! The code was a really nice touch!
Aww, poor Marik... but I love that he still has the defiance in him to sneak out!
Loved the POTO references!
| Ghost Wulf chapter 5 . 4/7/2008
Aw... that was sweet! Ok Marik, I forgive you now. Great job on this chapter and I can't wait to hear the story about Marik and Mhera's mom!
| Ghost Wulf chapter 4 . 4/7/2008
Hm... I don't know who I feel worse for, Mhera or Marik. Both I guess. The story about Marik's wife sounds really interesting and sad. Great job on emotions, off to read the next chapter!
PS: And thanks for dedicating it to me!
| KolaByNikola chapter 5 . 4/6/2008
While something tells me I might have read these out of order, this works very well as a stand alone story. Father-daughter relationships are a difficult subject to tackle, and yet you do so with aplomb. I don't think Marik is out of character, as you mentioned in a note, but more that you have built his character as you imagined love, loss and experience would shape it. Truly, I think this story is touching and unique; I cannot wait to read the rest!
| Kelekiah Galadrian chapter 5 . 3/20/2008
That wasn't too bad, good job! I think the idea for the story about her mother would be great! I'm excited to see how it'll turn out. Great job!
| PsychopathicPrincess chapter 5 . 3/19/2008
aww i like the idea of the story behind the portrait
can't wait for the next chapter
| Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 5 . 3/18/2008
I like the idea of the story behind the portrait; very intriguing!
I also like Marik's line "Whoever I let have your hand..." Is he referring to Sheon?
| Kelekiah Galadrian chapter 4 . 3/4/2008
Great job TDH! It's really good. There was one problem though, directly after the flashback ended until after Marik's thought was written in third person. Just thought I ought to let you know that. Other than that, it was good. Your chapters are gradually getting longer, which is good. Great job!
| PsychopathicPrincess chapter 4 . 3/4/2008
poor Mhera T.T
can't wait for the next chapter
| Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 4 . 3/4/2008
Awesome! Nice touch with the POTO reference in there, too!
| Ghost Wulf chapter 3 . 3/3/2008
Poor Mhera, I've burnt myself on accident a bunch of times -_- I hope she gets that essay in on time and Marik... you are a jerk. I'm sorry, but you are. Even if you are worrying. :P
Can't wait for the next chapter!