Reviews for Affinity
blinkenlights n spitzensparks chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
This was beautiful - your writing is very poetic and the way you describe Zuko's actions and demeanor through Toph's POV is very bittersweet. I love the way you portray both characters here but Zuko in particular really gets to me ;_; /cries forever
TaangFan chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
I love ToKo they really fit together :)
thentherewasIA chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
my feeeeeeeeeeeelllllllssssssss ssssssss omg.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
This was adorable. )
Lalalalala-Land chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
I loved it!

I was wondering why it was rated M but eh, that don't matter.

I love the tranquility of the story; it is just so beautiful
Crazy Dyslexic Nerd chapter 1 . 11/23/2011

-Dyslexic Nerd
perchance to wake chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
That was adorable. I loved it.

Non Malum chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
Great story, with good descriptoon of Toph's 'seeing'.

But it should be rated K, or at most, T. It might be seen more by more people if you lower the rating. I was reading while squinting, waiting for a $3* scene or something creepy :P
Sepsis chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
Dance Elle Dance chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
LOVED this! You did an awesome job writing Zuko and Toph.
Rat chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
Great story, I love the interaction.
petros308 chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
Wonderfully done, none of the others that came after touched is same note, the rating was set a little high though
FirePony16 chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
Interesting... :)
tomboy 26 chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
This was such a bittersweet story. It felt a little sad but also hopeful. Nice work!
The Sweetest Venom chapter 1 . 9/10/2010

uwah. it was kinda sad, really.

pretty, but kinda sad~
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