Reviews for Heatwave
4everhis91 chapter 33 . 11/16/2009
I liked the game :) I also love the way the Cullens are so protective of Esme (even though I bet she is a true force of nature in defending her family) She could b totally scary scary mom :) As for Rose.. I think its good and should b said... Bella should know the straight truth of the matter.
4everhis91 chapter 32 . 11/16/2009
I loved the interaction with Charlie. Please write an out-take that shows what Bella missed before she stated down the steps and was able to hear them. I would love to know what started this conversation and to b able to c/read it from EPOV so we could hear Charlies thoughts 2 :)
4everhis91 chapter 31 . 11/16/2009
Ug turn the ringers off LOL :)
4everhis91 chapter 30 . 11/15/2009
a bed on a truck, a bed of roses, a pillow soft bed... it doesnt matter... its all good as long as Edward is there :)
4everhis91 chapter 29 . 11/15/2009
loved the song choices and I listened to them ... u do something to me was completely moving and I think Rob needs to record it ... it soulful and would be wonderful! Suits the saga perfect... u needed to make a soundtrack list for all the books. I would love to c that playlist!
4everhis91 chapter 28 . 11/15/2009
Bella sing on stage ... wow Jaz has his work cut out for him on this one... but I would love to c her do well
4everhis91 chapter 27 . 11/15/2009
the hair washinf was so touching
4everhis91 chapter 26 . 11/15/2009
Alice is like the sex police right now ... LOL Bella bet Em ... how fantastic!
4everhis91 chapter 25 . 11/15/2009
PAINTBALL! :) this is em's kinda fun!
4everhis91 chapter 24 . 11/15/2009
I love the emotions and bonding and Alice setting him straight on his anger. The poem pure romance and Edward deciding to have some fun was wonderful news for us readers :)
4everhis91 chapter 23 . 11/15/2009
so cute and sweet :)
4everhis91 chapter 22 . 11/15/2009
I think Em is so fun :) He balances out all the rest of the serious family members
4everhis91 chapter 21 . 11/15/2009
the sneeze sound great to me! I love Esme so is so wonderful ... I am glad Bella always pays such sweet attension to her.
4everhis91 chapter 20 . 11/15/2009
I loved the cop thing! That was perfect... now I know why the fainting was in the last chapter. That is so good. After all everyone should get caught parking atleast once in there life. Bella's right ... thats fun and exciting :)
4everhis91 chapter 19 . 11/15/2009
On crap Bella ... pass out some other time! That was not fair to tease like that then suddenly stop with nothing else at all! WOW! That really hit hard!
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