|Reviews for Heatwave|
| irishgirl32 chapter 9 . 2/7/2008
I think you did a wonderful job writing from Edwards pov. I really am looking forward to reading more!
| BlackBells chapter 9 . 2/7/2008
I don't think you need a beta, spelling grammar etc. seems fine to me. Everyone makes little mistakes here and there but its not overly obvious or anything. i liked the EPOV! maybe try it more often? cos its good to get both points of view. 2nd august for breaking dawn...hmm dont even want to wait that long :p but i had it good cos i started reading the books once eclipse had already come out so i just read them one after the other.
| Elle-H 23 chapter 9 . 2/7/2008
you portray edwards POV and thoughts wonderfully,
he sounds just as he should sound
as for bella and her naughty sounding dreams...good on her!
keep up the great work
| KawaiiMeoww chapter 9 . 2/7/2008
Woww, I liked it in Edwards POV; Bella and her sleeping too, lol!
| daniella chapter 9 . 2/7/2008
i love this fanfic!
one of my favs!1
| hot 101 chapter 9 . 2/7/2008
This was a very interesting chapter to say the least I loved it!.And this was probley my favorite chapter of them all just because it was in Edwards POV!, I mean as I read the twilight books I was always wondering what was going through his head so its cool to read chapters like this soon please.
| Ordinary-Em chapter 9 . 2/7/2008
really good chapter i can't wait for the new book to be realeased too.
I love edward in the chapter, it's nice to know what he is thinking time to time.
Geat job update as soon as you can...
| bloodredeclipse chapter 9 . 2/7/2008
I love it! You ca[tured Edward's POV perfectly in my opinion. Eclipse came out August 7th if I remember correctly. I am pretty sure about that because I got into the Twilight series late July! Love it and update soon please!
| Nora chapter 9 . 2/7/2008
please update soon
i love you story
its truly unique, and it has a lot of potential
| KlutzLike Bella chapter 9 . 2/7/2008
Very good. Interesting take on the situation, as well.
| Fiercest chapter 9 . 2/7/2008
aw! i love EPOV its my favorite! keep writing, i love this story
from one author to another
| ashel-13 chapter 9 . 2/7/2008
I loved Edward's Point of View. It's good to know when Bella has that effect on him because we all know what he does to her...lol.
| MeyaRose chapter 9 . 2/7/2008
| bittersweetromance123 chapter 9 . 2/7/2008
i loved the chapter. i like chapters in edward p.o.v's. update soon.
| Cassie chapter 9 . 2/7/2008
Okay...you are an amazing writer...very talented. I love all the detail you used in this chapter regarding Edwards thought. Oh, and by the way, Eclipse came out on August 8 of 2007. I remember cause i counted down the days...lol.
Email mr if you need any advice on your story or anything! I love to hear from the authors!