Reviews for Heatwave
myxbeautifulxidiot chapter 6 . 2/2/2008
aw, so sweet! i loved the girl bonding time while the boys were off showing off and being, well boys. SO AWESOME! keep it up!
la vampire susan chapter 6 . 2/2/2008
aw i like it! :)
bittersweetromance123 chapter 6 . 2/2/2008
update soon.
browneyedgrl061 chapter 6 . 2/2/2008
please continue i love it!
Akatsuki Blossom chapter 6 . 2/2/2008
this is a relly good chapter!
averysubtlegift chapter 6 . 2/2/2008
that was a really good chapter. (i think it is my favorite of the bunch so far) You really have a great way of portraying the characters - very true to the books

thanks for updating! hope to read more soon.
Gabriel Wolfe chapter 6 . 2/1/2008
Oh. . . . ALONE. . . What type of naughty work with that ensue. Update.
heytherekalilah chapter 6 . 2/1/2008
I'm not sure if you meant this or not, but you've kept to the author's orignal writing style wonderfully! Your amazingly skilled at keeping Bella in character; She's still the same girl we know and love throughout your story. And (I feel weird admitting this) I was waiting for the Twilight series to go through this part of Bella's relationship with Edward. The more personal, heated side. haha. You've given me a wonderful guilty pleasure P

Hope you continue your story soon. A work!
Contorted Thoughts chapter 6 . 2/1/2008
oh ... I wonder what they are going to do alone ...
stupidvampires101 chapter 6 . 2/1/2008
I can't wait to read what other fun activities they have at the lake! The sun burn/hand print was funny. That actually happened to me one time too! I fall into the very pale category with Bella. My husband thought it was quite funny, I really didn't at first! Anyways, can't wait to read more about the heat wave. Something tells me there is a double meaning to that title. )
MeyaRose chapter 6 . 2/1/2008
fiancee, not girlfriend...

Nice story!
CleverWriter2416 chapter 6 . 2/1/2008
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG EXB FLUFF! i love it...heeheehe i cannot wait for the next chapter! update el fasto!
bellarina chapter 6 . 2/1/2008
Wow Edward you naughty boy! This was a really fun chapter to see the guys relaxed and having fun and Bella able to talk freely with Rose and Alice about things with Edward.
full.speed.adrift chapter 6 . 2/1/2008
Loved it! So cute and really good writing!

Charlotte :)

4-is-lovely chapter 6 . 2/1/2008
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