Reviews for Heatwave
HomeRoom Buddy chapter 7 . 2/4/2008
This has to be one of the best Twilight FanFic's I've EVER read! There are hardly ANY spelling errors, (Which is awesome, as I usually find many in a story.) the chapters are nice sizes, and you seem to update normaly. I definatly can't wait for you to update, I'm dying to know what Edward want's to show Bella next!
Elle-H 23 chapter 7 . 2/3/2008
*fans face*



again, i felt as if i were there, your descriptions are fantastic!

This section is so true to Edwards character. This special cave place is just the sort of thing he'd show Bella.

Great job.

Edward is so so so sweet (im jelous lol), I loved the line about the stars ;~;

So, once again, awesome chapter...


cant wait for the next chapter
NewRomantic44 chapter 7 . 2/3/2008
I really like this story

it is actually nice to find that people keep to the characters in the stories. Your Characters are very similar to those in the book and that i appreciate.

Update soon, Emazza
irishgirl32 chapter 7 . 2/3/2008
I love this story its great and I cant wait to read more!
full.speed.adrift chapter 7 . 2/3/2008
Loved it! That was a great chapter!

Charlotte :0

Update soon!
Belle07 chapter 7 . 2/3/2008
deniella chapter 7 . 2/3/2008
i love your story, its really good, and the idea is really good to. i havnt been this interested in a story for awhile.

by the way

are you planning on a lemon?

i want a lemon

pretty please?
xiomara209 chapter 7 . 2/3/2008
there so cute..update soon..
browneyedgrl061 chapter 7 . 2/3/2008
i love it please continue i love it!1
Michelle62092 chapter 7 . 2/3/2008
wow..intense, but i like it :D :D

please update soon :D :D
jazbabe621 chapter 7 . 2/3/2008
wow... i love the cave idea! its simply amazing. cant wait for the next one. keep up the good writing! ]
katefron chapter 7 . 2/3/2008
effing amazing! update soon!
Edward'sBringingSexyBack chapter 7 . 2/3/2008
AH! i love it! it's so steamy! lol. great job-write more soon. I loved edward's thing with the cave. Very, very edwardlike.
Contorted Thoughts chapter 7 . 2/3/2008
yay! more to come!
My-Bella chapter 7 . 2/3/2008
That was definitely one of the most romantic Edward gestures I've seen yet! Awesome chapter!
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