Reviews for Heatwave
Vera Rose Nightingale chapter 6 . 2/3/2008
PLEASE! continue to update! I absolutely love this!
Sly Roxx chapter 6 . 2/2/2008
The three girls lounging in the lake with the three boys whooping it up at the center. Haha, that's a great scene.
Naladia chapter 6 . 2/2/2008
loving the story. I enjoy reading about Bella and Edward romantic scenes. Update soon!
Courtney chapter 6 . 2/2/2008
OH! I love this story! You have to wright more. This story is awsome. PLEASE!
KawaiiMeoww chapter 6 . 2/2/2008
You really are talented; I enjoyed this thoroughly, please please update soon.
myxbeautifulxidiot chapter 6 . 2/2/2008
aw, so sweet! i loved the girl bonding time while the boys were off showing off and being, well boys. SO AWESOME! keep it up!
la vampire susan chapter 6 . 2/2/2008
aw i like it! :)
bittersweetromance123 chapter 6 . 2/2/2008
update soon.
browneyedgrl061 chapter 6 . 2/2/2008
please continue i love it!
Akatsuki Blossom chapter 6 . 2/2/2008
this is a relly good chapter!
qrstuv chapter 6 . 2/2/2008
that was a really good chapter. (i think it is my favorite of the bunch so far) You really have a great way of portraying the characters - very true to the books

thanks for updating! hope to read more soon.
Gabriel Wolfe chapter 6 . 2/1/2008
Oh. . . . ALONE. . . What type of naughty work with that ensue. Update.
heytherekalilah chapter 6 . 2/1/2008
I'm not sure if you meant this or not, but you've kept to the author's orignal writing style wonderfully! Your amazingly skilled at keeping Bella in character; She's still the same girl we know and love throughout your story. And (I feel weird admitting this) I was waiting for the Twilight series to go through this part of Bella's relationship with Edward. The more personal, heated side. haha. You've given me a wonderful guilty pleasure P

Hope you continue your story soon. A work!
Contorted Thoughts chapter 6 . 2/1/2008
oh ... I wonder what they are going to do alone ...
stupidvampires101 chapter 6 . 2/1/2008
I can't wait to read what other fun activities they have at the lake! The sun burn/hand print was funny. That actually happened to me one time too! I fall into the very pale category with Bella. My husband thought it was quite funny, I really didn't at first! Anyways, can't wait to read more about the heat wave. Something tells me there is a double meaning to that title. )
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