|Reviews for Heatwave|
| whistfull lullaby chapter 6 . 2/1/2008
ow! goodie goodie goodie! i love it ud soon!
| bloodredeclipse chapter 6 . 2/1/2008
YAY! I absolutely loved this chapter! It's a very different mood than your other story so its kinda nice. I love it and I hope you update soon!
| xiomara209 chapter 6 . 2/1/2008
how cute..update soon..it was just what they needed..a day in the sun..
| mytwilightaddiction chapter 6 . 2/1/2008
great chapter, update soon, please:]
| yrkdrk chapter 6 . 2/1/2008
Looking forward to the next chapter!
| Brie chapter 6 . 2/1/2008
Amazing! i love this idea. so original! cant wait for the next chapter! ur a really good writer!
| Edward'sBringingSexyBack chapter 6 . 2/1/2008
AH! I love it! so much fluff! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE ASAP!
| RockstarLife chapter 6 . 2/1/2008
HAHA! THAT SEEMS LIKE FUN! :-D I LIKE THIS STORY A LOT! :-D AWESOME JOB! :-D
| michiewichie chapter 6 . 2/1/2008
*squeals* this chapter was so good!
i felt like i was there with them!
i wish i was:(
| My-Bella chapter 6 . 2/1/2008
Aw! I love when Rose is nice to Bella!
| averysubtlegift chapter 5 . 2/1/2008
I think your story is quite good so far. You capture the essence of Bella and Edward very well - as well as the rest of the Cullen siblings. I also liked the points about deoderant and where to stash her undies - good points when you are hanging with super sensitive vampires. The statement about the heat is quite true I believe - the heat cranks up those crazy hormones. There was a line in Ch3 I am unsure of which contained the word twigged - that is a word I am unfamiliar with?
All in all quite enjoyable - hope you will keep writing this story and update soon.
| myxbeautifulxidiot chapter 5 . 2/1/2008
this is great! really well written and super cute!
| la vampire susan chapter 5 . 1/31/2008
YAY! update soon!
| Shannon530 chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
You call it fluff but im enjoying it thoroughly! Its nice to just have something of the characters while i patiently await Breaking Dawn! You writing style is so close to stephenie meyer, and i adore it! -S
| 4-is-lovely chapter 5 . 1/30/2008
YAY! IT'S SO AWESOME! I HOPE YOU UPDATE AGAIN SOON!