Reviews for Heatwave
reader chapter 4 . 1/27/2008
please update soon

i really like ur story
Karah chapter 4 . 1/27/2008
Update, update! Please?
Karah chapter 3 . 1/27/2008
lol That was pretty good! Good job of portraying Edward
Karah chapter 2 . 1/27/2008
That was really good, but you forgot to put periods or commas after someone finished speaking.
Karah chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
This seems like a good story...
Bellashouldvebeen chapter 4 . 1/27/2008
oh you ahve to update again please i like this whole heat wave thingy.
LoverofEdward chapter 3 . 1/24/2008
ill love this its so romantical!
LoverofEdward chapter 2 . 1/24/2008
ahaa! lol edwaRD!
LoverofEdward chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
haha very good and lotts of detail!
Xxtwilight.obsessedxX chapter 3 . 1/21/2008
aw that last paragraph was so sweet. i think its hilarious that she's in a bathing suit and she's not going swimming. although im sure edward is completley content with how she is dressed ::wink wink:: lol well update soon! :D
bloodredeclipse chapter 3 . 1/21/2008
I love this story and I love Send Me Soaring too. I always am waiting for you to update both stories! I love it and I hope you update soon.
Isabella24 chapter 3 . 1/20/2008
keep writing! it's really gooD! I love it!
Carrie chapter 3 . 1/20/2008
i thought it was so great! i can't wait for more! please write the next part soon!
teamdemonmonkey chapter 3 . 1/20/2008
awh... talent. you have talent! you're ability to convey exactly what feeling you want... i'm jealous.

EHE
Elle-H 23 chapter 3 . 1/20/2008
great chapter, i think i stopped breathing along with bella when edward was applying the sunscreen lol.
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