|Reviews for Heatwave|
| Karah chapter 3 . 1/27/2008
lol That was pretty good! Good job of portraying Edward
| Karah chapter 2 . 1/27/2008
That was really good, but you forgot to put periods or commas after someone finished speaking.
| Karah chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
This seems like a good story...
| Bellashouldvebeen chapter 4 . 1/27/2008
oh you ahve to update again please i like this whole heat wave thingy.
| LoverofEdward chapter 3 . 1/24/2008
ill love this its so romantical!
| LoverofEdward chapter 2 . 1/24/2008
ahaa! lol edwaRD!
| LoverofEdward chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
haha very good and lotts of detail!
| Xxtwilight.obsessedxX chapter 3 . 1/21/2008
aw that last paragraph was so sweet. i think its hilarious that she's in a bathing suit and she's not going swimming. although im sure edward is completley content with how she is dressed ::wink wink:: lol well update soon! :D
| bloodredeclipse chapter 3 . 1/21/2008
I love this story and I love Send Me Soaring too. I always am waiting for you to update both stories! I love it and I hope you update soon.
| Isabella24 chapter 3 . 1/20/2008
keep writing! it's really gooD! I love it!
| Carrie chapter 3 . 1/20/2008
i thought it was so great! i can't wait for more! please write the next part soon!
| teamdemonmonkey chapter 3 . 1/20/2008
awh... talent. you have talent! you're ability to convey exactly what feeling you want... i'm jealous.
| Elle-H 23 chapter 3 . 1/20/2008
great chapter, i think i stopped breathing along with bella when edward was applying the sunscreen lol.
| dragonwitch250 chapter 3 . 1/20/2008
Will you do Edwards POV? I hope,can't wait to read more!
| Tamper with my memory chapter 3 . 1/20/2008
I havent read your other story .Dont cut yourself short this is a great story. I will be looing forward to more:)