Reviews for Run
lori.ravenheart chapter 1 . 7/26/2014
Well, that was spooky and unexpected, yet quite neat.
pgrabinEdward chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
Wow- great story! So glad you gave the warning up front! So tragic but believable! Didn't suspect the twist at all!
LifeIsJustADreamForTheDead chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
Omg thats so messed up. U have an intriguing mind. Im impressed :O
scarlettmeadows chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
I hate this and love it in equal measure. You write expressive and incredibly powerful fics. Thank you for this uniquely moving story.
Marvolo.R chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Honestly, this was amazing :) I was more happy that Lucius was alive than sad because of the deaths. I do not like Ginny anyway :D
The arithmancer chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Very dark. Don't like this Draco
yesterdaz chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
The ending may not have been happy per say, but I can't really say I didn't like it. I mean, I knew Draco was going to resurrect someone, I just didn't know it was Lucius until he knelt down and started speaking.
Night13 chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
... oh wow, really didn't expect that too happen. Quite suspicious of Draco because of the way he was acting, too plain/nice/subdue, but definitely didn't expect this quite an interesting way to twist the story up _
sumthin.clever.5 chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
'Ginny's lips turned up in a mirthless smile. "Of course you're not. I've heard you moaning his name in your sleep for years, and I thought it was just nightmares. But it was fantasies, wasn't it?" Her eyes were sharp as the fangs in the mouth of the silver snake. "You've been dreaming of this almost since we first got married."' I originally thought these lines referred to Voldemort. After all, he was the one they were discussing, right? Draco had never entered the conversation. That's why Harry's circumvention of it confused me. Had she accused him of fantasizing about Voldemort, surely Harry would have vehemently refused. Now I'm just trying to figure out when the heck they began talking of Draco. I don't understand.

And of course Harry and Draco's first interaction confused the hell out of me. Clinging hugs? Holding hands? Whispered endearments? Huh? Weren't they just near enemies 8 days prior? I'm confused. And what of these shared dreams, as a matter of fact?

No, I don't think he does know. Harry is not properly crazy. This story opened up with his main thought being "Malfoy was right." Then after the event, he was worried about where he puked and erasing spell traces from his wand. Then he worried about JUSTICE, planning to calmly and patiently explain his actions and accept his responsibilities and decided to visit Kingsley, LEAVING THEM ON THE FLOOR! No, Harry had no inkling of an idea what Draco must have been feeling to discover his father's death in such a way. Harry immediately detached himself from his situation. Shock and confusion were about the only true emotions he felt. Despite the grief you hinted at him feeling, I don't buy it enough. Maybe a little, but not enough. Actions speak louder than words and he left. Abandoning the scene. Will he even attend their funeral? I don't even know how Draco believe Harry was on his pain level. And their current relationship still puzzles me. Quiet confessions. Encouragements. I just don't get it.

And please don't get me started in this latest behavior. The feeding? Tracing skin? Cuddling? Kisses? Did Harry ever love Ginny? Just wondering.

Okay, I wondered if he had something to do with it all, but this? Never saw it coming. Kudos for the completely unforeseen ending. In hindsight, maybe all my early complaints of "something just ain't right" should have led me to believe that what seemed to be heading in an obvious direction probably wasn't. Oh well. And damn skippy those words applied to several. You and your vague words, leading your poor audience this way and that, just KNOWING we'd draw the wrong conclusions. Well done. So mad so many were sacrificed, though.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Damn, now I feel really stupid!

I should have known, but my harry/draco loving stupidity still got me to think Draco wanted to help Harry, although I kept thinking of the bracelet, when the dark artifacts were mentioned. And of course I also thought it was Voldemort... stupid stupid stupid!

But I still didn't get why it had to be Harry! And also I have to agree with the person who commented before me that I'm wondering what kind of relationship Draco had with his father (ugh).

I thought that it was Harry turning into Voldemort because of the Horcrux thing but that he just denied it to himself!

But there just were so MANY hints! the fruits, the cane, the da...damn thing (which i didn't get until I read the other comments) and so on... I don't think I've ever felt this stupid after reading something! :D

All in all a very dark piece with a very devious Draco, not what I usually like but still very well written!
Blarrg chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
So, way late because this is an old story, but I loved it. As soon as Kingsley asked about artifacts, I knew Draco was up to something, and I figured it was to bring Lucius back as soon as he said "Da-damn, Harry, I knew you would come."... But I still love it. I ended up laughing on and off for the next five minutes because it was just such an interesting twist.

Gotta say, though... a few of the nuances in there have me wondering what kind of weird relationship Draco has with his dad. Ah well.
Property Of Eriol chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
I almost lost my jaw at the end there and gasped SO hard. That was SO INTENSE!

Didn't see that twist coming at all. I thought it was Voldemort like everyone else, then I thought it was Draco trying to bring Voldemort back, but THEN I read when Draco said "that bracelet I sculpted from your cane" and totally flipped. The only thing I don't understand is why it had to be Harry... but I guess I just missed something. I guess I'll just have to read it again! (yay!)

Loved it. (like i could feel anything else towards your stories, though) You just keep proving again and again why you're like my favourite author on here. I wish you were published! ... Are you? Totally would not be surprised if you were.

Not my usual style but I'm adding that to my favourites because... well, just because.

Thank you so so so so so so so so so much for writing! The Harry/Draco fanfiction would be severely lacking without you to contribute to it.

Property Of Eriol
YOU GO GIRL D chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
Wow, This fic was amazing...

Cross that

DAMN, this fic IS supercalifrablabla...(well, you get the point)

I didn't see this coming and I don't like horror but I loved this and I'm unable to transform my late obsession with this fic into words, sorry for that.

So I'll just say that you're awesome.

I love the psychological elements in your stories

But one little thing, though...170 stories? Isn't that a little bit too much? Do you have a life outside fanfiction? Please don't write so much, I'm worried that you're imagination will be overworked eventually. And there will come smoke out of your ears and fire not far after that and you'll be found dead all of a sudden. I'm just worried, I still love you though.

Love,

Me
Xx.Toxic.Little.KisseS.xX chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
I love the fact that my heart broke, just a little 3

Brilliantly written, explained and paced, as always D

Jaffa

xxx
Nihtingale chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
Very original
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