|Reviews for What He Never Said|
| Sandyswrite chapter 1 . 2/23
This was such a fantastic scene; well-written, in-character, and showing development in the characters' relationship (or signs of development, anyway). A great find. :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/3
Lovely. Beautiful characterization, great use of Glitch's unfortunate quirks. Wish there was more!
| Magicgirl29 chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
O_O Glitch! Yikes I so wanted to kill zero and cain after reading this oh my gosh I so wanted to stop after hearing what he did with the fire but I just couldn't well done
| Cigarettes And Moonlight chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
This piece made me happy.
I was a bit worried when you first brought in the fire. It seemed a little too cliche. But I kept reading. Boy, am I glad I did.
It did make me want to kill Zero myself.
But the ending still left me feeling rather good.
| PennyHill chapter 1 . 11/14/2008
At , interest Tin Man, community thegraygale, we take weekly turns to review fanfic. This is what I wrote for this story:
Recced because: This one-shot was published on 1/4/2008. Not only is it another backstory piece on the time when Cain, Glitch, and Raw were tied to the log, but also their developing friendship from Glitch's POV. For those who love Glitch, this is really well done and deserves to be lovingly dusted off and re-read again.
| WitchyWanda chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
Oh my god, poor poor glitch. He is so stupid but brave! And.. *kicks Cain in the crotch* Cain better realize THAT soon. :D
| Fredricko chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
Absolutely brilliant. What I appreciate the most is that you adhered to the personalities of the characters to a tee! That is rare to find here on fanfiction, unfortunately. But you pulled it off, my friend, and marvelously, too. Not only that, but an excellent story to top it off. I am pleased.
Excellent job, Foxieglove, excellent job. D
(p.s. This is my very first review! I've never felt like bothering before. So please keep writing!)
| Andi chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
Aww poor Glitch. He's so cute and loyal *hugs glitch* Great fanfic, I enjoyed it.
| Olafur Neal chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
Aww. Glitch is such a good friend. I enjoyed this story immensely.
| NatureGirl52180 chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
Aw, poor Glitch! But nicely, nicely done. Everyone was very in character. I liked the little peak into the history Cain/Zero have.
| Gamine Madcap chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
Aw...that was cool. I kinda wanted him to ask Cain what he'd done at the end...but I loved it anyway. Love the fire line-hehe...long live the classics. Keep up the great work!
| Moony-Blues chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
Can I please slap Cain across the face? I wanted to seriously hurt that man, moreso than I wanted to hurt Zero (probably because I know what's coming to the Longcoat). Poor Glitch. I cringed at the "How about a little fire" line, but you pulled it off very well. Nice little tribute to the 1939 film. Good job. This one was very well written.
| Allronix chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
I'm a sucker for friendship stories, and Zero's torture made me snort at first (fire and Scarecrows are a given), but when you implemented it, the snort went away and I got the chills. Inventive and nasty use of the zipper.