Reviews for Batter Up
Shortneay14 chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
Awwwwww Poor Hueboo, that's so sad. But I loved the story thou, keep up the good work.
priorityqueue chapter 4 . 1/20/2013
HAHAHHA Caesar is fuckin' hilarious in this, love it!
Secrets4theunderground chapter 4 . 6/30/2010
Aww this was great! I LOVED IT!
KrisB.723 chapter 4 . 9/9/2009
THE DOOR U PERVERTS, THE DOOR!

I am so perverted, thanks for pointing that out. This is so going in my faves, I love it!
Urumi-Inoue16 chapter 4 . 12/26/2008
it was really great i loved it!

do u by any chance have any others like this one?
SwagSammich78 chapter 2 . 9/8/2008
wait...

I just noticed in the beginning of chapter one, you said Jazmine was 13. Then near the end of the first chapter Caesar said they were ten. Wha? :O

But it's all good. I still love reading it and we all make mistakes. So no biggie.

:)

-Kelsey
SwagSammich78 chapter 4 . 8/11/2008
(the door, you perverts, the door XD)

THIS CHAPTER...*snort*

MADE ME...*laugh*

SO SO WEAK.

That's it. This story's going in the favorites. I absolutely adore it.
SwagSammich78 chapter 3 . 8/11/2008
"Hey, Davey! How's about a good ol' cupa joe to start the day, eh?"

I LOVE Caesar.

And I also love the mentioning of David being before Huey on myspace. haha. myspace jacks up everything.

Love the chapter! :D
SwagSammich78 chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
“Jazzy! Jazzy!”

Huey was honestly gonna have to kill that boy.

“Dude, chill. I mean… we’re ten. "

HAHAHAHAHAHA. Those two parts had me so weak.
Justaperson1718 chapter 4 . 8/3/2008
Great story! The ending really made me laugh big time
Anime's-mistress chapter 4 . 3/8/2008
David's terrible, but the story's hilarious. C:
MiSSZSN0WFlAKE chapter 4 . 2/25/2008
AH OMG! THIS WAS LIKE THE BEST STORY ..EVER! HAD ME ROLLIN XD
MiSSZSN0WFlAKE chapter 3 . 2/25/2008
AH! i busted out laughin a lot durin the 2nd chapter XD especially when i read "Waitress! Waitress! I need something to get this shit taste out of my mouth!" sounds like somethin i would do LOL
MiSSZSN0WFlAKE chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
i slapped both sides of my face when i read the end of the first chapter.. i was like.. :O WHAT? ILL KILL AT BASTARD FOR YOU XDD
Humb1eBeginnings chapter 4 . 1/12/2008
This was a good ass story.

The whole thing was funny and enjoying through out the whole thing.

When Jazmine was faking having sex, that was to funny.
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