|Reviews for Finding Air|
| Senuna chapter 20 . 6/15/2011
Please don't tell me you've abandoned this fic :(
I need an UPDATE!
| Jester chapter 20 . 7/17/2010
Your story is so awesome! It's one of the best National Treasure fics that I've read. I just found your fic today and couldn't stop reading! It took me a while, but I'm finially caught up now. I really hope you finish this story because it's great! Please keep writing!
| Spice of Life chapter 19 . 9/18/2009
PLEASE UPDATE THIS! It's been over a year! It doesn't seem like it was that long ago though, actually. But I still want to read the end!
| Revriley chapter 20 . 11/20/2008
I don't need to be clearer, do I?
| Spice of Life chapter 20 . 11/16/2008
We need an update, or I'm going to start a rambunctous and annoying cheer!
| Totbrf chapter 20 . 8/27/2008
Hey...you haven't given up on this have you? Really...it's one of the best. You should finish, you are so close! I would love to find out what happens with everyone! Poor Riley...things weren't looking up for him where you left off...
| xamyxisxsnazzyx chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
OH MY GOD!
I have been looking for this fic for months!
I couldn't remember what it was called, and I, quite conveniently, forgot the term 'cluster headaches' so I had no way of finding it.
So, trusty wikipedia helped me find you.
AND HOW HAPPY I AM!
I love this story!
I think you've captured the characters really really well and I love the whole thing!
Anyway, off to read it all again! *squee!*
| Samps432 chapter 20 . 7/1/2008
i just recently found this story and i love it! i cant wait of the next chapter, update soon!
| Miss Fenway chapter 20 . 6/7/2008
| SeventhTatar chapter 20 . 6/7/2008
holy shittake mushrooms, that was a cool chappie! i loved it so much.
| Jaeh chapter 20 . 6/6/2008
where did you get the dreamland stuff? google again? *asks innocently* awesome, so you could find a lotta things at google the, lol... . ever used yahoo?
uh-oh. Tomas is back. And kudos to Riley, awesome hacking there! would've been fun if i could do that too *sigh*
Anyway, awesome, can't wait for another chapter!
| Totbrf chapter 20 . 6/6/2008
Oh CRAP. Chinese Man really dead? Geez. Not related, okay. Got it. Oh, Chef, tell me the end is near...(the end of the story, not the human race)
| Miss Fenway chapter 19 . 6/5/2008
"Oh boy! Oh bad, bad, bad, BAD!"
*the reader considers all the incoherent reviews she has left today.
"Must get s;eep and stay away from caffiene."
UPDATE SOON! I LOVE THIS STORY!
| Jaeh chapter 19 . 6/5/2008
evil evil cliffie! evil!
yay! updates! finally :p!
I actually understood quite a lot.. :D now, I just plain can't wait to know what happens next!
and how do you know about all that stuff? the missiles and everything? er... yeah! :D
well anyway, awesome update and can't. wait. for. more!
| Totbrf chapter 19 . 6/5/2008
Heh. "Secret Asian Man" was a mistake a child made in trying to sing "Secret Agent Man" ... I just thought it was funny and fit Chinese Man.
So, Chinese Man is Tomas's father? Geez. That family needs some happy.
I'm totaly buying into the stolen bombs/thermo/shmermo/fo'fisson you're selling. Sounds legit to me. Love Tomas's control over Riley when "the voice" returns. And for some reason I really liked Riley rolling away from the controls for sec, then having to roll right back up to them. Funny what sticks with a person.
Uh, did Riley just eat some lead there at the end? NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!
Honestly, these are coming fast! Thank you!