Reviews for Self Control
Slatavinge chapter 1 . 5/5
Can jou write an ikarishipping story too?
CloudsAreFluffie chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
Oh... oh wow. *Shaky shaky*

This was... wow. Intense. I love these two together and... this was incredible.
ObsessedwithBirds chapter 1 . 11/25/2008
Awesome story... I like it! If only there were more like this!
War the Fell Avatar chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
Yes, that was nice indeed. I'm happy to see I'm not the only one who likes this pairing.

Very well done, for it being your first sexual scene. Definitely good stuff.
Katelynn chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
You have got some serious talent - please, keep it up!
Cosmic Hostility chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
O...I like it! Although, it is one of the pairings I never would have thought of, you did a really good job with it. Keep going!
SaabelsWife chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
Wow, that was HOT! Really awsome!
SuicidalToeSocks chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
These two need more love on fanfiction. Seriously.

I'm not a lemon fan, but I can't say I disliked this in the slightest. You have a very poetic way of writing. Everything just flows so nicely, you can't help but love it! Of course, it did help that I couldn't love EliteUndersipping any more than I already do. If you're serious about a series with these two, I'm all for it. I'll keep an eye out.

Pretty much an instant favorite here.
GoldenRaptor chapter 1 . 1/26/2008
I myself wouldn't have thought about this pairing, but I liked it alot!
The Renowned Obscurity chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
Amazing. I love this shipping. To pieces. We should make a community or something... and gather all the EliteUndershipping fics as possible!

So far I only know of you, me, and Seiko-sama...

But seriously, you should definitely write a series. Bring love to LucianxAaron! *waves eliteundershipping flag*
DarkAuraWolf chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
thank you so much for creating a story with this pairing, i've been searching forever for one and i agree that we need more stories with these pairings :3
entzunden chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
This made me all kinds of happy. Do start a series! With more lemons. :3
pyra-da-pyro chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
very good pleaser make more please
Ventress chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
That is just AMAZING. I squealed the whole time! These two are so cute! :D