Reviews for Heart of Lost Light
Daiz Park chapter 17 . 10/23/2013
where is part 3? did you delete it if so why?
shadowmaster0304 chapter 17 . 1/4/2013
Where is the sequel to this I can't find it
Zatch Bell-01 chapter 3 . 7/9/2009
If this was a contest I would give your Digimon and Pokemon crossover fanfics a 20.0 because they were great stories I ever read.
Luke chapter 11 . 5/28/2009
Definition time:

Shun-turn your back on, ignore, push away

Bellow-shout

Grovel-beg

The characters in your story do a lot of these at the wrong time.

Your story is great but, seriously, dude, get a dictionary.
Melanie chapter 6 . 5/28/2009
Wow. The people in your story are very angry they glare at everyhing. Other than that it rocks and I love reading it!
Beserkians fury chapter 17 . 5/10/2008
This was a good ending to a part of the full story. Can't wait for the next one to be revealed. Will Ash turn Team Rocket around and make them good guys? After all he IS the son of their boss. I hope Giovanni had a will writen out. Until next time... FARE THEE WELL FOOLIAH HUMAN!
Lord Pata chapter 17 . 5/6/2008
Interesting final for this second part, this one was shorter than the first one, I think that the first one was around 26 chapters long right?

Then again this one was more focused in rescue Kari and since she was back well there wasn't much else to do for the moment XD

Anyhow you sure have really good talent for this kind of crossover fics, I liked Pegasusmon and Nefertimon fighting together, they make such great team

Good luck with the third part of this trilogy of yours, keep it up :)
PEJP Bengtzone chapter 17 . 5/6/2008
I wished you could try to make Pokémon/Digimon crossover, featuring Ash, TK and the other Digidestined, along with their Pokémon and Digimon, without featuring any shipping with Misty.

But know to the main fact to this review; If you want to, you could use any of my DigiPokémon in your next story. I have two new ones, both of them are Armor Digivolutions for Pikachu; I think their names was ThunderWoodmon (Digi-Mental Egg of Hope) and SparkAngemon (Digi-Mental Egg of Sincerity). ThunderWoodmon is going to be a tanooki-like version of Woodmon, who use an electric version of Razor Leaf called Thunder, while SparkAngemon's attack is going to be a mixture between Hand of Destiny and Thunder Punch called Celestial Lightning Fist. Oh, and Raichudramon's attack is going to be an blue electric blade-like shockwave called Bluewave Striker.

P.S.

But, still, I see you as an idiotic amateur to moron author, not only because you actually support such a dreadful romance of forbidden love (Since Misty seems to be 5 years older than Ash in the videogames), but also because you are supporting non-canon shipping like the one between Yukinari and Risa, while she is her own brother's answer for a certain terrier-like alien leprechuan, who seems to be medical doctor, professor and magical potter, and even because of the fact that you made an interesting story involving Pokémon/Digimon-crossover, there TK was absent, although he is supposed to be one of the most important characters in a crossover between Pokémon and Digimon.

OBS! This last part is not a flamer, just a dissing comment from a friend of unfairly treated people like Ash.
Joshua32 chapter 17 . 5/6/2008
Wow! An awesome way to end part 2 of the 3 part story! I loved this one so much! Will I be in your next story of this trilogy? And will I meet back up with Ash? I look forward to the next story! I'll always be there to revierw for you!
Lord Pata chapter 16 . 4/24/2008
nice chapter, it was really nice to see Gatomo and Kari reunited at last

Things sure seems to be getting interesting more and more from this point :)
Joshua32 chapter 16 . 4/24/2008
Wow! Another great chapter! I like the fact that Kari will be traveling with Ash in the Pokemon world, Just wondering. You planning to leave me in New York? Keep up the great work and I'll continue to review for you! I promise!
Lord Pata chapter 15 . 4/16/2008
is good to see Kari back but where is Gatomon? o.O

I haven't seen her in the last 3-4 chapters, I think the last time she got mentioned was on chapter 11 if I recall well, and she supposedly was the one who was more worried about Kari? lol

Anyhow is good to see Kari back now wonder what will happen next?
Beserkians fury chapter 15 . 4/16/2008
Lemme guess, one more enemy? Or just the epilogue? One of the two, I know it. Until next time... FARE THEE WELL FOOLISH HUMAN!
Joshua32 chapter 15 . 4/15/2008
Yes! Another awesome chapter! Really glad Ash and Kari are back together now! You plan on leaving me in New York or would it be possible for me to go with Ash and Misty? When they head back to Pokemon world? I just don't want to be in the same place as Jen. Keep up the great work and I'll continue to review for you!
PEJP Bengtzone chapter 15 . 4/15/2008
I think that you should make a chapter, there that Jen gets the punishment she deserves, once and for all. And I say that with true honor, not as an barbarian bastard, who doesn't show respect for people.
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