|Reviews for Nightmare|
| Julianna Bell chapter 27 . 9/8
THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST HERMIONE/FENRIR FANCTIONS I HAVE EVER READ! HOWEVER, I DID NOT LIKE THE ENDING TO BE HONEST. I think you should have left the whole Harry part and should have ended it with Tyra pouncing Lupus. Please make Hermione and Fenrir reunite in the sequel please.
| htr17 chapter 27 . 7/28
This story was amazing, I loved it! I really do hope to see a sequel sometime in the near future. I really want Hermione and Fenrir reunited with each other again. Good story :D
| AD-DM chapter 27 . 7/19
more please either was amazing
| HGDMSS chapter 27 . 7/19
Harry is a BASTARD
| Lucyole chapter 27 . 7/16
argh now i don'z know who is the eviler guy Harry or voldemort to be honest Voldy was
almost saner here than Harry, i love Fenrir he rocks, and you need t omake a freaking sequel
and kill harry saddly that they need him for killing Voldy but maybe voldy winning wouldn't be all to bad in the end damn it I'm now on the dark side whatever I'm on Hermiones side and we need to rescue her from crazy Harry hopefully she maybe will come out of the obliviate somehow would be interesting
and why Did Sirius and Remus helped him in the end oh gosh he did something to them didn't he
Please for all thats good and holy write a sequel. *cookies for you*
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/9
Wow, Harry pulls a Wormtail? Betraying and hurting his best friend Hermione because he is too scared of a wolf / fight / disobey?! I can tell I don't like this Harry / fiction at all, sorry.
| LovelyMed chapter 27 . 7/7
Where is sequel?
| uyen.dinh.90 chapter 27 . 4/17
Despite everything...I really loved the story and this ending sucked . I want a sequel.
| uyen.dinh.90 chapter 16 . 4/17
I don't know, but I thought only an alpha could change form at will...unless you're trying to say that harry is one too?
| uyen.dinh.90 chapter 8 . 4/17
This chapter was nicely written. I liked that you kept Fenir as the "nice" guy. Even though he was in his wolf form he didn't come in attacking her, but was playful and calm. He also seemed to have mellowed down at the end of this chapter.
| uyen.dinh.90 chapter 5 . 4/17
I've come to skip reading the word "pet"
You use somebody's name every time you talk to them...so the usage of pet in almost ALL of his sentences is becoming too much.
I do enjoy the fact that Fenir is trying to be nice though. It comes off as a man who isn't used to doing nice things for others, but is honestly trying to for her. (which is definitely how you wanted this to go bc Fenir didn't seem like the guy who would mollycoddle anybody)
| uyen.dinh.90 chapter 4 . 4/17
The writing style is clean and with little errors, but it seems...like a younger author wrote it. It is missing a lot of depth that makes the writing come to life.
Also the over usage of "pet" is starting to grate.
| uyen.dinh.90 chapter 1 . 4/17
This is an interesting concept. I think I will enjoy this if all the loose ends are tied at the end.
Why would Snape give up Hermione's name? (unless this is OOC and Snape isn't actually a spy for the order...or if Dumbledore told him to give it)
Why did Harry hit Hermione?
| xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 1 . 4/7
I was re-reading everything. I hate reading your FenrirXHermione fanfics. Not because the plot isn't developed enough or characterisation isn't good enough but your endings! They are a ripper. All i wanted was one ending of reprieve but i haven't gotten that and won't get that :'(
| Slytherin Queen chapter 13 . 3/31
I really really like Hermione and Greyback together! I really really do! And what made me ship it even more was when Fenrir told her he'd give her the knife to kill Lucius... He was a coward anyways... BUT IM SHIPPING IT SO BAD! Keep writing!(: