|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Sword of the Hero|
| English Major chapter 24 . 3/20
You have some truly excellent ideas and some unique plot twists that I really enjoyed. However, your English skills need some severe attention. One cat: cat. More than one cat: cats (NOT cat's). One Potter: Potter. More than one Potter: Potters (NOT Potter's). More than one Death Eater? Death Eaters. NOT Death Eater's! Pluralizations do not, ever, require apostrophes. This is Primary School English you need to learn. Belonging to one Potter: Potter's. Belonging to more than one Potter: Potters' (or Potters's). The possessive requires an apostrophe, always. Also, you often use the wrong one of their/there and too/to. Paying more attention to every word you type will greatly improve your readability. Other than the grammatical inconsistencies your story is quite original and engaging. Thank you for your contribution to Harry Potter Fan Fiction.
| Shadowed Sorceress chapter 1 . 3/4
| RollerKlau chapter 31 . 2/2
Two words come to my mind when I think about this story...
| The Insane Blue Rubber Ducky chapter 4 . 2/1
I'm prett ysure this is an oversight: the entire chapter 4: chapter 3: casualties of war is underlined ):
I'm currently without my glasses until I get a new pair and this has made reading this chapter horrible for me, the entire chapter underlined keeps messing with my eyes x.x
| Reader chapter 1 . 1/13
I LOVE this beginning: it's unique, well-written, and a great start to this story! Looking forward to reading it!
| rainbowycupcake chapter 31 . 12/5/2014
First of all: damn you for writing such an amazing story! It kept me up all night last night because I just couldn't tear myself away from the last chapters. And those were insanely long, so I gave up sometime around 4 in the morning, but I was dying to read the end.
That being said, thank you for writing such an amazing story! It has been a long while since I read a fanfiction that was this captivating, so I'm really happy that I stumbled upon your fic and I'm looking forward to reading the other stories of this trilogy.
Much love :)
| stars90 chapter 31 . 11/4/2014
This is a beautiful, powerful story. Full of genuine emotion, real struggle and heroism. This is a tale of a world at war. I can believe it, I can see it, I can feel it. Incredible work
| Cassiopeia Black chapter 2 . 9/29/2014
Put an epic entrance for harry
| HopingForTheBest chapter 1 . 9/12/2014
I'm really hoping that this story turns out to be great. I'm also really hoping that you don't try to use anymore Olde English, that was disgraceful. I'm still willing to give the story a shot though, considering the fact that this chapter basically told me that Harry has to fight Voldemort...lol
| TheUltimateFandomer chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
Looking into the amount of effort you put in this makes me remember that not all fanfics are crappy.
keep up the awesome work :)!
| FreelanceBum chapter 22 . 7/25/2014
This is how insanely dangerous fanatical cults begin.
| MrsJeck chapter 26 . 7/6/2014
Aww this is so heartbreaking...I admire how you write Ginny! That's our girl, spirited and wonderful! Kudos!
| Timothy chapter 26 . 6/26/2014
What is this Ginslutshizzloni? And what is it doing in the DLP library? Skrew you, pal, and bring Pads back!
| Epeefencer chapter 8 . 6/3/2014
I just can't really see Harry and Padma as a couple.
| Epeefencer chapter 2 . 6/3/2014
What about the instruments that Dumbledore has that keep track of Harry? They would show he is still alive.