Reviews for Harry Potter and the Sword of the Hero |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Harry should start conjuring multiple patronuses. Or make his stronger. When he was 13, his patronus could drive away over a hundred. Now he he can only drive off a few at a time. |
![]() ![]() since ibam an atheist... i have always known muslims are psychotic xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Changing the number in the Call Box entrance made No Sense. The old number spelled out MAGIC, this one spells nothing. Also you are using passed, when the correct word is past. However, it is an interesting story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Since I'm a Muslim, I have always believed the Christians were evil and Turks were good (Jerusalem is one of our holy cities)! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yoooooo. This was epic so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved the dr who reference there |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, there's a lot of things I don't understand with this chapter. For one, WHY THE HELL ARE THEY ALLOWING HARRY TO GO TO THE FUNERAL BY HIMSELF WHEN HE WAS LITERALLY ATTACKED ONLY A LITTLE WHILE AGO? Why does literally ANYONE trust Dumbledore with Harry's safety? He's the one who didn't allow Harry to leave because it was supposedly the safest place for him but I still don't get why he doesn't just cast a Fedilius Charm on the Dursley house or better yet move Harry to a safe location. Why was no one watching Harry when he was attacked? And there's also the mind-boggling fact that no one tells Harry ANYTHING! It's frustrating for the reader and it's frustrating for Harry. Where is the harm in telling Harry that Voldemort might try to recruit him so that he's not unprepared for the possibility? Taking Harry to Diagon Alley without glamour and/or Polyjuice was irresponsible. Hell, Remus should be under polyjuice too. How is Harry planning on fighting this war when he literally knows 2 useful spells? |
![]() ![]() ![]() To see that a fight between legendary figures is made up of spells known by fifth years in Hogwarts is a super let down, I mean where is the ancient magic, illusions, elements… not expelliarmus and reducto, has magic really stayed the same for a millenium? How disappointing |
![]() ![]() ![]() your oc is unnecessary |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just came across this story and had to add it to one of my favorites. Well written, wonderful plot, and it kept me captivated. Well done. I'm looking forward to reading the next two of the series. |
![]() ![]() What happened to the wards around Hogwarts ? |
![]() ![]() Well the absurdity/pretentiousness of the first sentence provided an imediate reaction. Consider looking elsewhere for reading material. As to the crusades , the majority of CIVILIZATION was probably completely unaware of and/or indifferent to this little blip in history |
![]() ![]() ![]() why did you even add an oc in this harry war progressing very well on his own |