Reviews for Harry Potter and the Sword of the Hero |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i just have this image im my head and am laughing my ass off: in divination harry apologizes to ron (and makes up some stories for the card reading). after they meet up with hermione but get instantly interrupted ny McGonagall who tells Harry to come with her. Harry just has time to say "Sorry Hermione for this morning. Ron could you pleasefill her in on what I sayid in Divination? thanks see you later." as Harry walks away he hears Ron say very obviously loud enough for Harry to hearSo, Hermione... It is your destiny to own a goat. ..." |
![]() ![]() ![]() He who attacks first or invades is who is evil in my book. Or rather he who orders it done. There are good and evil on both sides of a fight or war. |
![]() ![]() Amazing fic. However the chapter where 800 DEs and aurors meet, why authors are so worried to allow them to kill an enemy who is there to kill them. What you probably failed to notice is that a war is not won if you are not willing to kill for your own freedom. And they are not killing any innocents. This is one failure by most authors is that soldiers are not sent in a war to die. They are there to kill in order to protect their country |
![]() ![]() ![]() how tf did the relationship with ginny after minimal conversations in the earlier chapters.. just turn to a full blown love affair. tether to life? blud tf. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have read this story for more than 10 times already since I discovered the trilogy back in 2015 (late, yea I know haha). This is singularly the most EPIC HP story I've ever come across and I've read plenty already! It's no wonder honestly that you've become a professional author when your 'early' (?) fic works were already filled with so many spectacular, action-packed scenes that come across so vivid in the mind of a reader like me. You've written Harry's hero qualities so well here and I'm actually falling in love bit by bit with the characterization. This has become a sort of my comfort reading whenever I feel hopeless and mentally-exhausted in life. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dumbledore did thing with a wand that few rarely even witnessed when he was in school so yeah he got similar results to these. Honestly maybe spend some more time learning about the universe you want to write about. Useless fic here is where I call it quits |
![]() ![]() ![]() How did 9 subjects become 14 OWLS there are shitty fanfics out there then there is this fan fic. Good job |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes lets ignore all the laws and reasons why two wands connect and just use priori incantatem when we feel like it. Oh and lets create a fight between two of the most powerful wizards that ever lived and have them throw around reductos and expelliarmus’. Nice going |
![]() ![]() Angst is better just shown than constant whining about guilt. #1 pet peeve in hp fanfiction. hopefully it gets better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry should start conjuring multiple patronuses. Or make his stronger. When he was 13, his patronus could drive away over a hundred. Now he he can only drive off a few at a time. |
![]() ![]() since ibam an atheist... i have always known muslims are psychotic xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Changing the number in the Call Box entrance made No Sense. The old number spelled out MAGIC, this one spells nothing. Also you are using passed, when the correct word is past. However, it is an interesting story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Since I'm a Muslim, I have always believed the Christians were evil and Turks were good (Jerusalem is one of our holy cities)! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yoooooo. This was epic so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved the dr who reference there |