Reviews for Harry Potter and the Sword of the Hero
Epeefencer chapter 8 . 6/3/2014
I just can't really see Harry and Padma as a couple.
Epeefencer chapter 2 . 6/3/2014
What about the instruments that Dumbledore has that keep track of Harry? They would show he is still alive.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
I only just finished the first chapter, but wanted to point out a couple of things:
First, thank you for using words like "thee" and "thus" CORRECTLY. You have no idea how annoying I find it when people get it wrong. As a criticism, if Slytherin's blade was inches away from Gryffindor's heart, how could he roll out of the way? Would'nt the act of moving one side of his chest upwards to roll actually quicken his demise?
SirGriffinfire chapter 18 . 4/7/2014
Ethan would actually have been Tom Riddle III - Moldyshorts was Tom Riddle Jr.
SirGriffinknight chapter 6 . 4/6/2014
Rafe would be Tom III - and hates him. Nice touch!
xvector chapter 31 . 3/21/2014
Awesome! On to the sequel...
xvector chapter 26 . 3/20/2014
Harry and Ginny's relationship progressed WAY TOO FAST. Don't get me wrong, the kiss was nice and all, and its obvious Ginny understands and loves Harry, but there is absolutely no reason for Harry to "love" her back. The two characters have barely interacted before this kiss and Harry has little reason to be anything beyond a good friend to her...

That said, fantastic chapter!
xvector chapter 14 . 3/19/2014
Honestly, why does this only have 321 reviews and 752 favorites? It's an absolutely amazing story so far.

If you're on the edge about reading this one, take the plunge! Totally worth it up to here, so far...
xvector chapter 9 . 3/19/2014
Harry is angsty and secretive to the point of immaturity. I absolutely can't wait to see this all backfire on Harry. He doesn't give a second thought to the fact that his friends are outside of the protection of Hogwarts. He doesn't mention most of his visions, or the new take on his visions. He doesn't even care about training.

It will be interesting (and welcome) to see the full reality of war hit Harry in the face. For now, however, he seems to be pushing himself away from everything, and it seems he is subconsciously trying yo avoid preparing for the war or thinking about it in any way.
xvector chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
That first chapter was... Astonishingly amazing. I simply can't believe I never found this series before. Just... Wow. I hope Harry learns his true lineage. And is William a parallel for Ron (hair), in a foreshadowed future? Or Cedric? I guess there's only one way to fins out...
Guest chapter 4 . 3/3/2014
'm m ok
Tr0g chapter 31 . 2/4/2014
Good story. I would not be as critical of the work as Joe has been in his early notes. The original characters are believable, and the progression to a powered up HP made sense.

I liked it, and I'm looking forward to the sequels.
Blake2020 chapter 1 . 2/1/2014
cool
Ophelia Lake chapter 31 . 12/16/2013
I just found your story and read it all in 2 days. Such amazing writing. Better than the real thing. Thank you so much for sharing your work. I'm off to read the sequel!
Mararsi chapter 2 . 11/22/2013
Hermione wouldn't check the watch she just gave Harry to see if he is okay? (actually, I'd imagine she would be checking it constantly just because she's anal)
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