Reviews for Harry Potter and the Sword of the Hero
lillutonboi chapter 14 . 11/22/2009
This is a good story. Only thing that's annoying me in Harry's self-pity. I can understand being upset and stuff, but I think you've put too much of the 'Why me...boo hoo'. Thanks for the goods read.
lillutonboi chapter 3 . 11/19/2009
Hey, great story so far. I think it's unlike Dumbledore to immediately assume Harry is dead just by looking at the carnage of number four, but I can see why you had to play it like that. Brilliant story just for the minor clues that something is different about Harry.
flynhghr chapter 11 . 10/22/2009
Despite typically disliking stories where Harry gets a super-magical-power increase seemingly from nowhere I find myself greatly enjoying your story. It's well thought out, and well written also. I'm looking forward to reading the rest...
flynhghr chapter 3 . 10/21/2009
I must admit I'm impressed. This story so far is definitely up there with some of my favorites. No super-power out of the blue is good, and even better that everything so far is definitely believable (except maybe the death eaters ALL having brooms faster than a Firebolt)
Lansday-Larry chapter 31 . 10/15/2009
Just finished the whole thing, wow, amazing, Wonderful and a thousand other words I am too lazy to type at the moment. Probably one of the best Harry Potter fanfics I've ever read.

Powerful, emotional, unexpected, and I wish I had the time to start the next one.

Can't wait till I'm able to start the next one!

-Larry
Old Man chapter 30 . 10/10/2009
Wow, like what the fu- just happened? Doesn't your Harry KNOW he has to live? To protect the world and all that? Why the hell would he sacrifice his life for Ginny?

I'm afraid this story isn't for me, cause its a load of Hot Steaming pile of ball sack juice from an old man trying to prove he can still do it.

Hope you enjoy it.
anonymous chapter 27 . 10/9/2009
"but he looked as if he had aged many years in a few moments."

That line is getting overused, a lot. You keep describing Dumbledore like it.
SomeGuyFawkes chapter 3 . 10/8/2009
Good Lord! I could write several pages on the many things wrong with this chapter and this story. But that, doesn't seem likely to help in this case.

I'll just summarize to save future reader grief...

Skip, Juvenile, Reader abuse by proxy.
SomeGuyFawkes chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
This would be a promising story but it is hampered by:

Excessive hyperbole, ridiculous fight choreography, and a "hero" that could not possibly be that incompetent (This Gryffindor would have been pecked to death by the barnyard geese).
kiman1917 chapter 15 . 10/6/2009
im surprised that this story didn't get more reviews. Im impressed on the work that you can give to us.
jonayla chapter 31 . 9/29/2009
Great story! it's someting different than most, and at the same time still the same story! anyway I loved it and can't wait to read the next one!
Neumzie chapter 30 . 9/27/2009
what the fuck WHY did you have to kill remus! harry already lost everyone else from his past, couldnt you just give him REMUS!...

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OMFG DONT YOU EVER DO THAT AGAIN! I THOUGHT YOU HAD KILLED HIM OFF; I WAS TEARING UP! NOT COOL!...

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ok, like before, they really need to hug it out
Neumzie chapter 28 . 9/27/2009
what is harry doing, being so careless! he just heard footsteps and DISMISSED them!
Neumzie chapter 27 . 9/26/2009
i genuinely dont think America would dismiss a call for help that easily. we like butting into other peoples business to much (vietnam, iraq, korea...). the only times america has ever hesitated were when the cause was actually noble, though, so you might have a point here. pfft, fuckin america...

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the closing line of that "rebuilding hogsmeade" article is an opinion lol. i like the brevity, though...

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opinion at the end of the beauxbatons article, too! although, i didnt see that news coming; straight outta left field...

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why is harry limping? he didnt sprain his ankle in the fall from the bench to the floor...

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ok, that was cute. he better listen to his damn heart, now.
Neumzie chapter 23 . 9/24/2009
wait, Elendil? as in lord of the rings? lol
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