|Reviews for Somewhere I Belong|
| SilverDragon13 chapter 13 . 9/6/2012
I love your story. its confusing right now because not everything has been uncoverd but i hope to read more and final understand everything that is going on XD hope to read more soon XD
| IamBanane chapter 13 . 4/7/2012
interesting! really interesting! please update soon!
| Reno'sDemon chapter 13 . 2/17/2011
I'm with Yuffs on this one. Who IS her father? Though I have a nagging suspicion I know who it is. All in all, this is really good. I look forward to more chapters.
| MegaKiraraLover chapter 13 . 7/8/2008
wow...i notice you were doing good for about two months there with updating, but now you've gone three months without. and you leave me at a cliffhanger! -wails childishly- i hate cliffhangers!
Ararik (muse): -.- and yet you use them often...
MKL (me): -grins and recovers- dude, i like torturing others with them; i just don't like it when i'm subjected to them.
Ararik: ...i'm not even going to respond.
MKL: ANYPIE! here's a virtual pie if you update! -hands over package that will open and give you your pie when you update- it's virtual-flavored.
Ararik: ...? "virtual-flavored"?
MKL: -grins- geesh, year and a half and you don't know?
MKL: whelp, it means that it changes to the recipient's favorite flavor of the awesome PIE...
Ararik: -.- right. whatever you say, mkl-sama
MKL: damn straight! anypie, update soon, please? -puppy eyes- 'till then!
-MKL, signing out.
| Nixi-Ixin chapter 13 . 4/26/2008
This is pretty awesome, I like it...no...I love it! Keep it goin! It's awesome
| sophiecognito chapter 13 . 4/2/2008
One word to describe this fic: Wow
it's beautiful. Your writing style is perfect for this and Kitty (i'm glad to say it) is not a Mary Sue and is flawed which makes her a great character. You have a few spelling mistakes, but they're just minors though.
It has a mix of humor in it that I loved and drama. Gotta love the drama!
I'm intrigued by the bald man and his 'master'. Is Sephiroth working with them too?
Anyway no OOC-ness in here for not watching the movie you hit the spot on Kadaj's, Loz's and Yazoo's personalitites perfectly.
I'm waiting for more.
| Andreille LeFlore chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
Hey, when you gonna update? This story is tops! I SERIOUSLY can't believe you haven't seen the movie! Can't wait for the rest of this fine story!
| Ringbearingreasergal chapter 13 . 3/11/2008
Okay so I just got through this story and I must say I'm pretty impressed. At first I was a little miffed that it was the typical MarySue, but at least it's well written and hell we've all been there ). Besides, I LOVE well-written MarySues. You've got this really well thought out and I'm eager to hear more. The bald guy-her dad? Ew, ew, ew, ew, ew! And what side is Kitty on anyway?
Really clever how you introduce each character from a neutral point of view, ie when she first sees Cloud and Barret.
Zack's been melting my heart as of late in this story, he's such a sweetheart!
Kadaj is perfectly characterized, and I don't believe you when you say you haven't seen the movie because if you really didn't then you got really lucky.
Anyway, thanks for writing this. Gave me something to do during state testing D. Update soon!
| SHM QUEEN chapter 13 . 3/10/2008
I liked it. I hope u update again soon
| elusivemuse chapter 13 . 3/10/2008
Awesome! i feel so sorry for the SHM they can't catch a break! and poor loz, he keeps losing her... keep up the fab work
| elusivemuse chapter 12 . 3/9/2008
Please hurry and update! this story ahs me on the edge of my seat!
| Andreille LeFlore chapter 12 . 2/26/2008
This is an excellent story, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
| FloppyWandedDementorBoggerer chapter 12 . 2/5/2008
Awesome chappie! Can't wait for the next one _
| SHM QUEEN chapter 12 . 2/3/2008
I really like this story, please update soon
| laiastar chapter 12 . 2/3/2008
Its good, update soon.