Reviews for Jakes fantasy becomes reality but with a twist
bellaluv chapter 6 . 6/9/2008
UPDATE i like it so UPDATE please
Alexialexy chapter 6 . 5/10/2008
i love the story so far you have to keep writing i love it so much. KEEP WRITING!
Apple Slushie chapter 6 . 1/21/2008
I like your story, never a jacob fan but you can always change your mind
Full of Ennui chapter 6 . 1/20/2008
There are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes, maybe you should get a beta reader, but the plot and characters are good.
IloveEdwardxx0 chapter 5 . 1/12/2008
love the story! update soon

~IloveEdward~
CrestfallenlovesEdward1993 chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
OMC! wow...
DancingQueen7979 chapter 3 . 1/5/2008
cool