Love all these scenes!

Awww... Poor Buddy... -snikers- LOL! What doofus names their child "Buddy"? LOL! I mean, how many times did he get beat-up on the school playground because of his name?

just made me cry... *sniffle sniffle* so sweet and sad! I've read The Redemption Clause, and quite frankly I think it's the best piece of fanfiction I've ever read. Better than most books I've read in general, and that's a copious amount. I wish that there was some way you could publish it. People with as much talent as you deserve to get paid for putting the time and effort into such a great story. :) I mean, the part where Buddy, Violet, and Robin were all lying in the bed together, and Violet was reminiscing about what her mother had told her about intimacy... powerful stuff. I'm currently in the middle of reading Strange Alliance :) love it already! Hope that you continue your unique and addictive style of writing. :D

oh... oh my. I had tears in my eyes in the second scene. That was an incredibly poignant short, wow. I really love your writing style. *sniffles*

I love your Buddy more than anybody else's Buddy I've ever read too, I think.

Oh my, that was so... tear-jerking! Both sweet and sad.

P.S. Okay, NOW I'm off to read the sequel ;D

Oh...why did you take this out? It would have made at the least a wonderful flashback! It's so sad, but emphasises the points you made in the story about how cautious he is with his right arm.

Oh My Gosh! Please keep going! I am a already in tears and my laptop is getting soaking wet!