Reviews for Cactus Legs
JamesLuver chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
This is really good; it brought a smile to my face. I particularly loved the interaction between Todd and Lovett, and I adored this:

'His head snapped up and his eyes locked with hers. "You have just given your soul over to the devil."

Lovett cracked a small smile, "Better you than anyone else, I suppose."'

Great job. D
Lamia of the Dark chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
unamuerte chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
Beautiful work.
Crashxin2xMe chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
wow. this fanfic was fun, cute, and sexy. i love it!
Miss Malfaisant chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
God. I wish I was her. -shivers-

That was great. The only suggestion I might have is grammar-wise, you only capitalize the word after a quotation if the quottion ends with an ending punctuation. For example:

' “Yeah, Mr. T?” She called back. ' is correct.

' “Yes,” She squeaked. ' would not be.
Winnywriter chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
"No more priest pies for you!" Haha! is the pie nazi...(soup nazi joke?...anyone...meh...)

Haha! Nice work!
VampireSwan chapter 1 . 2/22/2008

I read the summary and thought...'Hmm, this sounds sufficiently strange, MUST READ NOW.'

I was right. It was strange in the best of ways and very sexy too.

Twisted Ingenue chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
Make-War-Not-Love chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
I really like the this story, its different from alot of others i've read. Keep it up. Continue this story please.
Kawaii Usagi Chan San chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
wow! that was so good! it was evil and sexy all at the same time! lovely job!
niki-chan2 chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
So charming, I loved it. I loved the soul line
Angel-o-Darkness chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
oh what a devil to give your soul too
ImGallStaffSorcererOfLIGHT chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
aww ;) I love it!
Mistress X chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
“Only if Mr. Todd is satisfied.” She said almost inaudibly.

His lips went to her ear lobe and he whispered, “Sweeney is pleased.”

That probably shouldn't have made me laugh but I burst out at that line. What a wonderful fanfic, and very in character too! Please right a sequel or part two. I would be very overjoyed. :D
Kasey Renae chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
I rather enjoyed this fic lol, it was different, but different is good. Nice job!
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