Reviews for If Only He Had The Chance
No-Rhyme-Just-Reason chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
If #5 is what I think it is, then this is one of the saddest stories I've ever read. Congrats if that's what you were going for.
Nao K. Kawasaki chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Heartbreaking :( buy very well done.
iLoveRomance2o11 chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
Oh:( Poor Fred! Sweet story. Nice work:)

-Lynn
majorfan3615 chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
love this
escapismandwanderlust chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
This was a beautiful piece. It balanced the sweetness and the sorrow perfectly.
Jadepowell chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
Pitty he didn't say anything!
witchbeth chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
Hey, I love your work and this story, I was just wondering if you could look at and review my story because I am a new writer and since you have written so many things I was wondering if you could offer a little constructive criticism. You were the first author I read on fanfic and later inspired em to write, so I was wondering if you wuold look at it...not to be a beta, just to offer some helpful hints...please? Anyway, I loved the story, good job
kayko15 chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
oh. This ones kinda on the sad side. I dunno why though. But I still enjoyed it. So keep up the good work. Later. K15
merielrose chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
very sad now. must find tissues...
Creative Touch chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
Aw..

that's both cute and sad. Oh and very well writen but still sad and cute.

Love the idea though.
peeweequidditchplayer chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
That was really sad. :(

I like the list idea.
Black Mirror chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
That was sad. Well written, but sad.