Reviews for The Hidden Hero
maiqsmail chapter 6 . 1/16
Bullshit. So just a rewrite of canon with no divergence from it despite the cosmetic differences?
Also, when he sees his father in photo, he says he has the same "untameable" hair. Which is very distinct as a family trait. I assumed he changed it with metamorph magic, but if he didn't as is implied, then how come nobody connected the dots? Same age boy in the same House, same hair, unknown pedigree, has not been legitimised successfully to ascertain his identity, does not have any papers and identifications if anyone has been bothered to check... This is just completely unrealistic that his deception would fly, but I guess this is T rating for you. Discontinued reading.
maiqsmail chapter 4 . 1/16
Ministry official at Dumbdumb's say so-was legitimising children? What kind of bullshit is this?
maiqsmail chapter 2 . 1/16
Huh, so the plot device is Harry being a metamorphomagus. Distant Black family connection? Weird how it folds both name and age registering charms of Hogwarts registry. GoF age line in 3WT could've been bypassed by metamorph then?
Guest chapter 36 . 12/25/2023
Harrydarcy chapter 36 . 11/26/2023
Thank you. I really enjoyed this story.
Notareal chapter 23 . 11/9/2023
Thanks for writing; thanks for posting:)
Notareal chapter 7 . 11/9/2023
Oooh! That last line? Beautiful!
Thanks for writing; thanks for posting:)
Screw This chapter 36 . 9/13/2023
Sure, some kidnapping, some mind-rape, some enslavement, much more mind-rape and brainwashing and then everything is great.

This fic is - and you are full of - pure shit.
iiNeo chapter 36 . 8/25/2023
I've never seen such garbage in my life. I hope your rotting in some ditch after writing this shit.
asingh123 chapter 2 . 5/27/2023
Plot ... yer name 's H'grid...

Mcgonagall here... .pffft... She only visits best of the best...

Sure... It was late... but Hagrid isn't suppose to introduce Muggleborns to ww...

Killed the whole vibe for me
Guest chapter 7 . 5/20/2023
very good
not a fan chapter 8 . 5/18/2023
each chapter worse than the previous one, this harry seems stupid (despite the fact that he is supposed to study much more) he throws himself into all the problems (supposedly "low profile" for this author) and almost the entire chapter is practically the canon but with 2 changes... it's horrible to read and I don't even know why I keep reading... but it's obvious that I'm not going to stand reading this until the end
not a fan chapter 7 . 5/18/2023
Well, nothing, his "destiny" has already gone to his head, bye "low profile" what a way to ruin a story, it would have been nice to see how he tried to keep this "low profile" and learned magic, worst of all is that he could play games with other people and he decides that he can't that he has to spend all his time studying (none of that is shown) and playing the hero...

good idea, lousy execution
not a fan chapter 6 . 5/18/2023
Horrible, he wants to keep a low profile and all he does is get noticed more... what kind of bullshit is this? Seriously, it is too convenient that he does not want to do something that he does want to do (quidich) because "he will not have time" but when it seems that a teacher wants to steal something, he decides to follow him no matter what and without notifying any teacher, even though he wants to keep "a low profile" what a nonsense story shit,

and it goes without saying that a large part of this chapter are fragments of the book that have been minimally modified... I don't know why make an AU if it's going to be almost exact to the books but with one or two changes... and surely the rest of years are the same he will mention keeping a "low profile" and end up doing all sorts of things that have nothing to do with "low profile"

and it shows that you have no imagination, you have skipped the whole year because you have no way of explaining the story if it is not with pieces of the book itself...

I just hope the next chapters are better... which I highly doubt
heidlebergchick chapter 1 . 5/7/2023
Very powerful.
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