Reviews for The Hidden Hero
styker67 chapter 36 . 1/10/2020
Bah Harry should have just became a dark lord screw them all
Voba chapter 36 . 1/5/2020
You should put a warning in the description about how this story is pornographic in nature.

If you want a dady-dom to mind rape all of the bad things that have ever happened to you out of your head, fine. But at least try to let people know about your fetishes before you propose that literal slavery, and literal mind rape are good actions to take against someone who might be mentally ill.
lilirose14 chapter 36 . 12/13/2019
J'ai beaucoup aimé cette histoire mais honnêtement j'aurais préféré que Harry revienne dans le monde moldu ou du moins quitte l'Angleterre magique. Il a été maltraité à un point indicible avec tous ses droits en temps qu'être vivant doué de volonté niés par une société d'enfants de 5 ans dirigée par des hommes avides de pouvoirs et manipulée par un vieux tordu avec un complexe divin. Quand bien même ce monde ait changé, de mon point de vue, Harry à été trop profondément trahi et manipulé dans cet endroit pour qu'il s'y sente au moins relativement à l'aise. Qu'est-ce qui lui garantit que les girouettes du monde magique Britannique ne vont pas lui retomber dessus sans cirer gare? Ou qu'il n'aura pas à nouveau son libre arbitre enlevé pour le "Plus Grand Bien"? Pour avoir été endommagé moi-même, je ne peux m'imaginer rejoindre pleinement un monde qui m'aurait temps fait de mal entourée de mes bourreaux. Surtout si ceux-ci se prétendent mes sauveurs.
Neoacoya1 chapter 36 . 12/5/2019
I liked the story right up until you forced Harry into magical slavery. I couldn't enjoy the story at that point because involuntary treatment is a sensitive topic for me. Nobody has the right to force treatment on someone just because they don't like their choices. A person owns their own life and they have the right to end that life if they so choose. Suicidal people should be convinced to get treatment not forced.
SpaceTime1969 chapter 36 . 11/27/2019
It is not very often that you find a fanfiction like this. A story that makes you take a step back and reflect on your life. Thank you for taking the time to write this.
Petrificus Somewhatus chapter 25 . 11/24/2019
I'm done. The plot contrivances and the cluelessness you've given to every character except Harry is ridiculous and never ending. Everyone is shallow, everyone is selfish, everyone is dumbed down. You just keep repeating the same pattern and cycle of behavior over and over again with no growth or evolution.
Jestersky98 chapter 3 . 11/17/2019
Honestly why is there no basic info for Mark Twist that all muggleborn should get? In canon Harry didn’t get it cause Hagrid showed up but now with Mark Twist there’s absolutely no reason for Hagrid to show up at all
Guest chapter 36 . 11/16/2019
Daaaaang that was a wild story! There were like three different common HP story themes all rolled into one and I absolutely loved it!
hi i guess chapter 36 . 11/3/2019
just finished reading this today and its one of the those fics, the ones that leave tiny little holes of yearning all over your heart.
ah god where do i even begin...i just loved Harrys aptitude for hiding, his cunning, MARK MARK TWIST, oh, and the happy surprise of the severitus and the especially sweet treat of Dracos friendship with harry omg its so fucking cute. my heart clenches when i think of the way draco dropped his wand (rather like it was in place of that one deleted scene from the movies) and you know what, i even loved Harry2. i was actually waiting for Harry to go all out on him, like corner him in private and be like "lilsten here mate i know who u are so drop the arrogance act" and holy cow the azkaban ive heard of "harry innocent in azkaban tropes" before and i've never wanted to read them, but your depiction of hi time, the trauma. eep i just realised this was written a decade ago, but i also just wanted to give this thing my love. i actually loved the concept of harry hiding in plain sight (so if anyone wants to give me recs and u have the time mail me at sofarawaydontfallawayfirstlove gmail./com (idk if thats the height of rudeness to comment, i havent even got an acc here yet!) ) and i loved twist acting as his own father omg. suprisigly , i found i even somewhat enjoyed the hinny!
lynn chapter 23 . 10/26/2019
hahaha make my day lol - i vote for your Daughter's Title idea - it made me laugh. Sorry but "The Duel" is soooo uninspiring for such a cool story. ok off i go to read balance of your work. Thanks for sharing this excellent completed work of art.
Ambaire chapter 4 . 10/25/2019
stopped reading because gryffindor. zzzzz
Wogennie chapter 2 . 10/17/2019
I know its over eleven years late, but this is golden. Very good, and well written. Its sweet, and to the point without to much "harry feels this" or "harry feels that" and excellent balance.
Guest chapter 36 . 10/10/2019
This is in my top 3 fanfics ever list and that is sayin' something given that I have been into fanfictions since 2007!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/9/2019
This author is an absolute moron. If you change so much, it is idiotic to force canon events. It just shows how uniriginal you really are and makes the entire story seem ridiculously stupid. Some of the changes preclude canon events from happening but you forced them anyway. Stupid. Rock hard stupid. Dehydrated rock hard stupid. Stupid so stupid that stupid has stupidly stopped making stupid sense. Trans dimensional stupid. Meta stupid.
Lightseed chapter 36 . 9/8/2019
This was one of the best stories I've ever read! I loved how you depicted the healing process/mental health accurately. Very well done.
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