I'm sorry, I'm trying to get over why the hell Harry even speaks to Dumbledore, much less lets him put his hand on his shoulder and seeks his advice. This is the problem with soooooo many Azkaban fics, including this one. It's only been a few days and Harry has already forgiven everybody. I'm not sure if I'm going to make it to the end of this story because I HATE wishy-washy Harry who is put through hell and passes out flowers.

The ending was terrible. I wish I hadn't wasted my time reading this.

You just cannot force someone to treatment. Anyone would be better than Snape. Snape would take his revenge on James Potter like this. I must say you ruined a good story. He would make Harry his servant. Every moment he looks at Harry he would see James Potter and not Lily Potter's son.

Good job.
You obviously understand that devastating emotional trauma isn't overcome with a quick spell or two.

I like this

I feel like Harry from here on out through this story loses his identity. I dont see him capitulating so easily I would expect him to take steps to make the wizards want to get him out of their world. This is one of my favorite AU approaches to the main cannon story but I just feel like there was a missed opportunity to show Harry deciding that the Wizarding world wasn't worth saving and since they won't leave him alone he will tear it down. I would have loved to read about the panic of the ministry and Dumbledore for when Harry ends his indenture. imagine them looking at memories and seeing his plans to end the Wizarding world for good.

I can't be the only one who noticed the invisibility cloaks absence in this story can I?

So, I read it.
I'm sorry, but after he was kidnapped back to the WW? And then just accepts it after having his mind and free-will violated? This story went to sh*t so fast it makes My Immortal look like a masterpiece. What a waste of complete time this was to read.

Second time reading this.

This story really turned to shit after they kidnapped Harry from the muggle world. An edgy and independent Harry was turned into a spineless Goody Two-Shoes after being forcefully re-educated, Chinese style.

Colour me disappointed.

Gave up on this as soon as he begged not to be in slytherin only to be with his boyfriend, ron. You should put slash in the title so people know.

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Ugh. Please no

No way in hell umbridge can cast a patronus she's a BASTARD

Hated this story by chapter 27 but finished it out of spite. Dude what in the actual literal fis wrong with you? The Harry in your story has been abused from childhood till 11, rejected by the society he saw as salvation and shown the true double standards of the wizarding world, and was literally tortured both by the dementors and Voldemort. Somebody like that, especially with as much supposed power and "training" as this Harry has would be more likely to just leave the wizarding world and saying fuck the consequences. He wouldn't stay in Britain, definitely wouldn't let himself be captured, and would have been able to throw off the properties of the potion they dosed him with. That's not even mentioning the fact that he could be considered emancipated because of the Triwizard tournament (not talked about in canon but definitely something that should be brought up). The story is rushed, the plot is so full of holes that it looks like Swiss cheese, and the character development is so 2 dimensional I thought I was watching an 80's sitcom. Good start, decent idea, terrible execution.

Finally! I remember reading this fic ages ago, literally years, and now I've finally found it again. can't wait to read it again.