Reviews for The Hidden Hero |
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![]() ![]() ![]() okay, I was wrong in my earlier theory. not that surprised, since there wasn't any real reason for Sirius to pretend to be Harry (and even less for him to act Like That) but it would have been fun. (the theory was pretty much dead when not-harry was sorted into slitherin, but I had to share it anyway.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() theory: not-harry may (or may not) actually be Sirius. I think it makes a little sensethe timing's too good, and while some details need some explaining, it would be hilarious. If I'm wrong, I'm wrong, but I kind of want that to be the case. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that took a disturbing turn. It was a nice story up to this point, but this is where I leave. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eeek I love this story! Not many fics explore what happens after he defeats Voldemort |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really want an alternative chapter in which Harry kills himself out of sheer spite |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really really want you to try and imagine that scene of Riddle extracting the fang, throwing it and it stabbing Harry... It simply can't happen, a fand does not have a shape that allows for that, so again you are trying too hard to do these semi-canon adaptations and it only ends up looking really silly |
![]() ![]() ![]() again... forced, in canon Riddle didn't offer to show the memory until Harry explicitly asked, here it came out of nowhere |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so damm forced, first of all I don't feel like this Harry should have been a Gryff, the whole hidden identity thing is not very Gryffindor at all, and Harry is hiding his identity because he is afraid of the psycho Dark Wizard, it seems unlikely that he would be willing to stick so much of his nose in the whole thing |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a craze! |
![]() ![]() So did Harry stay in the wizarding world or become a muggle? They way people treated him then when Dumbledore made him Snapes slave that should have made his mind up to become a muggle. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry's insecurities are getting quite tiresome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Harry! To have to let Snape into his head! Grrr! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You DO come up with some sick shit! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this chapter! It was awesome! |