Reviews for The Hidden Hero
SweetSouthernGal chapter 15 . 1/18/2008
I'd really like to know thr motivation Crouch Junior had for putting his name in the Goblet. I suppose its because people keep thinking he has the potential to be the next Dark Lord, but still...
MdnightRose chapter 15 . 1/18/2008
yeah! Another update! great chapter, I liked when 'Mark' was pretending to be his father, it was funny...I really don't think I need to say it,but...update soon!

minerdude chapter 15 . 1/18/2008
Good story. So Voldy has figured out who Mark is, the only question is who on the side of light will figure it out first. Since this will be a Harry/Ginny story arccording to the descrition that is my pick.
hiharrypotter chapter 15 . 1/18/2008
You may have an explanation but it doesn't make ANY sense whatsoever to include Harry in the tournament.

I look forward to your explanation.
lilyoftheval5 chapter 15 . 1/18/2008

Harry pretending to be a Muggleborn. A fake Harry Potter.

What brilliant and well-executed ideas you have...

Thank you, I'm enjoying this imensely.
SocietysMisFitWriter chapter 3 . 1/18/2008
Ok i just want to say i think the story is good, but im not going to read on. The flow of the story is slow for me or something like that. I thought though that i'd say that its a great story and good idea but im just not liking the flow...I think thats what it is not sure.
BDSanta2001 chapter 15 . 1/18/2008
Man, he never stood a chance against a Magic-eye did he? Barty Crouch Jr as Moody would have seen that Mark was using a glamour, though not necessarily what was underneath.

Eagerly awaiting the next installment...
sheepstamper chapter 15 . 1/18/2008
Well no surprise there? Keep going as at the end of the tornament things should start to get interesting...Sheeps
Anonymous chapter 15 . 1/18/2008
Great job!
Tara-Yo chapter 15 . 1/18/2008
hm definitely interesting - why would Moody put Mark Twist's name in the cup if he had no idea who he was? Anyway awesome chapter - please update soon!
ClaryFairchildPotter chapter 15 . 1/18/2008
ohohohoho please continue on please
Bobboky chapter 15 . 1/18/2008
i think that Mark should spill something on himself while jumping backwards and shouting 'WHAT!', falling on the floor and knocking himself out after hearing his name called.
Tula chapter 15 . 1/18/2008

i generally like your story, but how in the blazes is this chapter supposed to make sense?

The whole plot voldemort sprung in canon book 4 was about Harry's blood, Voldie is not aware that Mark Twist is Harry, so why excactly is he trying this complicated plot, if he could get his hands on the blood of an enemy far easier?
Merakien chapter 15 . 1/18/2008
Oh, I wonder what happens next...And I am already getting some ideas as to how the story will change after fourth year. I guess I'll have to wait to see if I am right, but hopefully not for too long! )
Memory King chapter 15 . 1/18/2008
Outstanding chapter, I really liked Harry's strength of character here. Liked the H/C plot heere, shame they will never get together. I'm looking forward to the H/G relationship starting up soon. Looking forward to more!
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