Reviews for The Hidden Hero
Vermouth chapter 20 . 1/21/2008
Oh please update! please! please! oh my god! you are evil! please update!
Sociopathic-Antichrist chapter 20 . 1/21/2008
Whoa!

Really good ending. Certainly get's you pissed off at Umbitch.

Post more, as this story really is fascinating.

Keep up the amazing work.

I wonder how badly Umbridge will be treated when they find out that she locked the Prophesised One in Azkaban?

Regards

Sa
padfootsrevenger chapter 19 . 1/21/2008
LOL...you are eagerly awaiting reviews, eh? Well I must say, this is one of the best stories I've read in awhile; I've fallen for it hook, line, and sinker.

-Eagerly AWAITING your next update,

Andrea
messhnhs chapter 19 . 1/21/2008
Excellent story so far. I can't wait to see how are you going to twist to 5th year. Keep writing.
sropike chapter 19 . 1/21/2008
You're EVIL! putting up two chapters just to end with a cliffie!

I don't think this is going to help with Harry's paranoia when he escapes.

sropike
JBF chapter 19 . 1/21/2008
well i expected better...

after all why dumbledore did not used veritaserum on harry to know his motives ?

in your haste to send harry in jail you forgot to make your characters act with credibility

also there are many little things that don't add up together like the fact that harry decided to learn seriously but you make him take divination and so on...

so a good idea for a fic but a really bad realisation
sropike chapter 18 . 1/21/2008
The third task goes as expected, unfortunately.

I will not presume to tell you how to write our fic, but I feel your Harry is out of character here: He feels he can trust noone, yet he isn't suspicious when Cedric wants to take the cup together?

But that's jut my humble opinion.

sropike
Sociopathic-Antichrist chapter 19 . 1/21/2008
HOLY HELL THIS STORY ROCKS!

Finally, we see a possible and believable outcome to the story.

Makes you wonder if they'll give him Veritaserum or pull a Sirius on him?

Well, hurry up and post more of this excellent story!

Oh man I can't wait to see all their faces when all this comes to light! *Cackles*

Regards

SA
Meandering Fox chapter 19 . 1/20/2008
Egad! That is harsh. I'm hoping for no Sirius-type 'trial.' Is this the point where Harry reveals himself? Also...you can post 2 chapters at once, yet you leave off with this?

Evil...pure evil. You're worse than voldy!
Kaci chapter 19 . 1/20/2008
0.o... You just left it off at that? What an exciting chapter, Voldemort using the blood of the exact thing he's trying to abolish, a muggleborn and MOODY'S DEAD! Ahh, Moody was one of my favorite characters in cannon, poor guy...

Good chapter, if this is the turning point of the story, I'm eargerly awaiting for your next update.
Sky chapter 19 . 1/20/2008
Oh no, how could they? Wizards are soo... ignorant, blind, frustratingly dimm.. sometimes. And Dumbledore should know better. Please post the next chapter soon, the cliffhanger is very hard...
noylj chapter 8 . 1/20/2008
Very good story. This chapter, though, reads like you are pushing the CoS incident to the start or middle of the school year. I don't think I read anything about Christmas and Mark didn't get a valentine's card. There is a lot of book 2 you can skip, but the time still has to pass...
FoschiaFreak-17 chapter 19 . 1/20/2008
wow...amazing! please tell me they find out Mark is innocent! are they going to use vertiserum and find out he is really Harry Potter? and find out he didn't kill anyone? update soon!
hilarydilarydoc chapter 19 . 1/20/2008
Wow, Dumbledore is really not doing himself any favors is he. I hope at the very least, Harry will be given a trial with Veritaserum. Please, please let the great unveiling come soon, followed by Harry telling Dumbledore where to stuff his apologies.
XinnLajgin chapter 19 . 1/20/2008
Wow, I'm looking forward to seeing how Harry is gonna get out of this one.
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