Reviews for The Hidden Hero
Memory King chapter 18 . 1/20/2008
Now that I think about it, Mark's use of Expelliarmus was rather stupid. He should have used Stupefy instead. Your story is good, but it falls into the infamous canon trap, just like so many others. I still like it quite a lot, mostly because you don't dwell on trivial details. Looking forward to more!
Greysh chapter 19 . 1/20/2008
I hope that you will update soon. this is a nasty cliffhanger ;)

Harry could escape, right? he can easly chance his looks again. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Rocky235 chapter 19 . 1/20/2008
"AN - Well, I hope you liked this chapter."

Well, yah, but the ending was a bummer.

You have a lot of good ideas.
lilyoftheval5 chapter 19 . 1/20/2008
Very disturbing. I feel so bad for him...
MdnightRose chapter 19 . 1/20/2008
ok, huge cliffie! That is so not fair! please please please update soon!

BDSanta2001 chapter 19 . 1/20/2008
I did not see this "twist" of fate coming. I'm hoping Sirius helps get him out.
BDSanta2001 chapter 18 . 1/20/2008
Oh no! I was hoping Cedric would make it out, alive, this time...
wsbenge chapter 19 . 1/20/2008
I just discovered this, and enjoy it.

Of course, Harry will change and escape. Does he join forces with Sirius?
anon chapter 19 . 1/20/2008
Rocky235 chapter 18 . 1/20/2008
Jeepers! I was hoping you'ld let Diggory live.

You've kept the same outstanding writing quality all the way.
anon chapter 18 . 1/20/2008
rellenh chapter 19 . 1/20/2008
Very interesting!
Merakien chapter 19 . 1/20/2008
THIS WAS AMAZING! I had a feeling that something like this would happen, though I didn't see Moody's death coming! Great chapter, I can't wait for the next one!
BigMike0 chapter 19 . 1/20/2008
great chapters. I can't wait for the updates
J. Palmgren chapter 19 . 1/20/2008
Your seeming wish to mostly retain the original timeline up and until the often used "Harry gets framed" plot device gets rather annoying and strained towards the end. I sincerely hope you are not going to continue into the fotsteps of JKR and write the plot into crap, the good side like total shitheads and Harry like a stupid ignorant and lazy victim.


Oh well. I'll at least give the next chapter a go.
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