|Reviews for The Hidden Hero|
| Sealunis chapter 8 . 1/12/2008
Great story! I love it.
I'm wondering what mean the random number at the end of some of the chapter ?
| Cocoa Girl2 chapter 8 . 1/12/2008
I like it. I do wonder a little why you have Mark face all the challenges at the end of the year by himself. Will Mark also be able to set Dobby free? And I can't wait for next year when Sirius breaks out of Azkaban.
| Deljuj chapter 8 . 1/12/2008
oh he's learnt deceit, flattery and lihuth
lihuth lies but the truth.
Queen of Candy
Of the Most ancient and noble house of Sugar and Caffeine
| Blueowl chapter 8 . 1/12/2008
Very nice, good change with Harry being more open (isn't that ironic) with Dumbledore about hearing 'the voice' and stuff.
I also liked the addition with Myrtle.
Looking forward to more.
| A Rainy Day chapter 8 . 1/12/2008
good chapter, I think it would be interesting if ginny learns that mark is harry in the next chapter, but it could be interesting with her falling for him as mark too.
| pottersparky chapter 8 . 1/12/2008
This is great chapther. I like that harry thinks a head and went to dumbledore when he heard that voice. He never was there when people got hurt. It good that did not have to go in the F.F this time. Will mark free dobby this time around or will he have to stay with malfoys? I like how he got that girl ghost to tell the headmaster what he is up to. This time ron did not go with him and be fun to see how they all act when he save ginny from harm. You are doing great job. Please update soon!
| hiharrypotter chapter 8 . 1/12/2008
That was fast paced. I liked it. No reason doing repeating something which has already been done.
One thing though. If he knew and suspected Ginny had the diary then why din't he pursue it further. I know he berated himself for it, but I think it would've been better that way and it would've made it complete AU.
Oh well. Just me I guess
| HappeeGoLuckee chapter 7 . 1/12/2008
Ack! Yea, I enjoyed it, but I'd like to read more. Soon, would be nice. How will this deviate from canon in the future? Like it and can't wait for more!
| Treck chapter 7 . 1/12/2008
Loved it! Want More!
Are you writing another fic while you post this? I saw your statement that it was 36 chapters and complete.
| HikaruOfArrow chapter 7 . 1/12/2008
| onnaz chapter 7 . 1/12/2008
i deffinitely enjoyed this chapter.
btw i noticed that you in rons letter to him called harry for harry instesd of mark.
| tgobg chapter 7 . 1/12/2008
Could you possibly go into more detail into what studies Harry prefers to learn most? I mean he does know about the prophecy and even had him say in early chapters he would need to be ready. So I would think after his first encounter with Voldemort that he could remember he would start studying more advanced magic or look up some obscure magic like occulmency or legilmency. I would like to learn what exact you have him studying, but other then that good job with the story.
| shiftyless chapter 7 . 1/12/2008
I wonder when they will find out that Mark Twist is really Harry Potter?
Please update soon
| Tempest07 chapter 7 . 1/12/2008
On the birthday letter that Harry received from Ron you addressed Mark as Harry instead of his fake name.
| sheepstamper chapter 7 . 1/12/2008
Nice to chapters, although they are a little bit close to 'cannon' for this retelling. Keep going as I want to see where you take this...Sheeps