Thank you for writing this story, it was very intreating and frustrating at times, I feel Harry was way too agreeable while they enslaved him, not even trying to fight back.

I am happy that it was a happy ending but part of me really wanted to see Harry tare people a new one when he was freed and maybe take some time away from wizarding Britain.

I am to much of a drama queen

I am supriced how well Harry is taking this, he had been kidnapped, mind r ped and inslaved. He was forced to a place where everybody except Ginny and Hagrid thought he was a cheat and a liar.

I was expecting him to speak up after Dumbledore. "You are welcome for the defeat of Voldemort, however I was kidnapped and forced here against my will and I remember how most of you thoughts I was a muderer, liar and a cheat."

If I was him I would probably said at the hospital that the next person who attempt to read hid mind would be killed

Bullshit. So just a rewrite of canon with no divergence from it despite the cosmetic differences?
Also, when he sees his father in photo, he says he has the same "untameable" hair. Which is very distinct as a family trait. I assumed he changed it with metamorph magic, but if he didn't as is implied, then how come nobody connected the dots? Same age boy in the same House, same hair, unknown pedigree, has not been legitimised successfully to ascertain his identity, does not have any papers and identifications if anyone has been bothered to check... This is just completely unrealistic that his deception would fly, but I guess this is T rating for you. Discontinued reading.

Ministry official at Dumbdumb's say so-was legitimising children? What kind of bullshit is this?

Huh, so the plot device is Harry being a metamorphomagus. Distant Black family connection? Weird how it folds both name and age registering charms of Hogwarts registry. GoF age line in 3WT could've been bypassed by metamorph then?

Beautiful

Thank you. I really enjoyed this story.

This. Is. BEAUTIFUL!
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Thanks for writing; thanks for posting:)

Oooh! That last line? Beautiful!
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Thanks for writing; thanks for posting:)

Sure, some kidnapping, some mind-rape, some enslavement, much more mind-rape and brainwashing and then everything is great.

This fic is - and you are full of - pure shit.

I've never seen such garbage in my life. I hope your rotting in some ditch after writing this shit.

Plot ... yer name 's H'grid...

Mcgonagall here... .pffft... She only visits best of the best...

Sure... It was late... but Hagrid isn't suppose to introduce Muggleborns to ww...

Killed the whole vibe for me

very good

each chapter worse than the previous one, this harry seems stupid (despite the fact that he is supposed to study much more) he throws himself into all the problems (supposedly "low profile" for this author) and almost the entire chapter is practically the canon but with 2 changes... it's horrible to read and I don't even know why I keep reading... but it's obvious that I'm not going to stand reading this until the end

Well, nothing, his "destiny" has already gone to his head, bye "low profile" what a way to ruin a story, it would have been nice to see how he tried to keep this "low profile" and learned magic, worst of all is that he could play games with other people and he decides that he can't that he has to spend all his time studying (none of that is shown) and playing the hero...

good idea, lousy execution