|Reviews for The Hidden Hero|
| Saissa chapter 22 . 10/18
I think the idea to pretend to be insane is a great idea, Mark.
Mark, everyone eventually will betray you - The Ministry, Dumbledore, the Dursleys - everyone!
Do not tell anyone and dont depend on anyone. You only have yourself to depend on.
| Saissa chapter 20 . 10/18
So Mark gets treated exactly like Sirius - dumped into prison without a trial!.
And the wizards claim to be superior to the muggles. HA! They are worse than the muggles!
Umbridge - the new villain that everyone loves to hate!
| Saissa chapter 19 . 10/18
Very interesting twist!
| Saissa chapter 18 . 10/18
Voldie never mentioned the name of Harry Potter or of Mark Twist...
So which one is the enemy who is providing the blood?
| Saissa chapter 15 . 10/18
So why does Moody put the name of Mark Twist into the cup?
Shouldn't he have put the name of Harry Potter into the cup?
So what is Mark Twist going to do now?
And furthermore - WHY did Moody put Marks name into the cup, and not Harrys?
| Saissa chapter 14 . 10/18
Now we just need to have Mark realise that Lupin gets sick on every full moon - before Snape decides to oust him.
| Saissa chapter 13 . 10/18
So finally Mark sees Pettigrews name on the map. That encounter with Sirius and the traitor was very good.
I like the last line - a very simple threat - You are NOT Harry potter.
Just say 4 more words Mark -out loud, in public - You are Andrew Dnirson
He He He - I wonder what would Draco would say when he learns he has been consorting with a muggle born for the entire year!
| Saissa chapter 12 . 10/18
I do understand you using "artistic license" with regard to Harry 2's brown eyes. but you cant use it to say that the tunnel trip for Mark was 1 hour long. Hogsmeade is right next door to the school. Both he tunnel trip and the above ground walk to the village should take no more than 10-15 minutes! It is also artistic license that Mark did not discover the name of Peter Pettigrew on the map either. He He He
| httpkirby chapter 36 . 10/15
You have my best wishes. I love this damn story to pieces.
| httpkirby chapter 26 . 10/15
| httpkirby chapter 25 . 10/15
This is so f****** up.
| httpkirby chapter 23 . 10/15
THIS IS THE MOST EPIC FANFICTION I HAVE EVER READ. I'D LOVE TO RANT MORE ABOUT HOW AWESOME IT IS BUT I DON'T WANT TO FILL UP YOUR REVIEWS WITH MY GUSHING.
| httpkirby chapter 22 . 10/15
Ghhhhh, this story is so freaking great and even greater at making me suffer.
I love it.
| httpkirby chapter 19 . 10/15
This is actually hurting me. ;_;
| jlencre chapter 36 . 10/7
I enjoyed reading a unique perspective of the HP books right up to the point that you had adults kidnap a minor and then forcibly mind-rape him. And then you had an old man pay off a debt to another man, giving that other man the legal right to continue mind-raping him... oh and giving ability to compel obedience into his victim. But hey, it all turned out okay because your victim ended up with Stockholm syndrome and decided that it had all been done for his own good anyway. Hey, he's even going to keep in touch with his abusers! Oh yay! / sarcasm
Too bad Voldemort didn't kill off those sanctimonious, hypocritical bastards before Harry got there.