Reviews for The Hidden Hero
InzanityRulz chapter 11 . 1/15/2008
Interesting chapter. Will the fake Harry be found out soon? Update soon!
solar1 chapter 11 . 1/15/2008
I must say that i'm still quite septical about this Harry 2...

But I won't stop reading now, yours explanations at the beginning of the chapter were convincing so I will just have to wait to see how your story will turn out!

Another thing, Harry a hero, yes, we all know that and so does the wizarding world but it never felt this way about himself! He has always been very modest about his actions. I believe it is very out of character for him to think all the time that he is a hero...

But it is your story and i respect that, you have totally the right to change the characters and their behavior.

But we careful with Harry 2, you have taken a very slippery road!

Good luck to you
SafirePhoenix chapter 11 . 1/15/2008
i'll keep my suspicions down for the time being, but i just know the fake harry is going to drive me crazy sooner or later. he's such a bastard! it's funny that dumbledore worries about harry becoming a new dark lord when the other 'harry' may be just that.
s0648960 chapter 8 . 1/15/2008
nice improvements to the story. I love the fact that harry is doing everything by himself. It makes things much more exciting.
meraki13 chapter 11 . 1/15/2008
Another great chapter. Don't keep me waiting too long!
high lord mage chapter 11 . 1/15/2008
great story, update soon. I especially love the idea of harry 2. I was wondering how he would be found out. real harry admitting or fake harry being caught?
animeflunky chapter 11 . 1/15/2008
hmm so "harry 2" is a huge bastard :P. Hm for now harry can just let him hold the spotlight and hell enjoy it... until voldemort returns and kills him of course :P
Cludd chapter 11 . 1/15/2008
I think the real shocker will be at the end of the year when Dumbledor tries to send Harry2 back to the Durseley home and they tell him that Harry2 isn't really Harry at all.
sropike chapter 11 . 1/15/2008
The story is coming along nicely.

Will Lupin be willing to give extra lessons to an unknown kid?

I wonder what might happen with the triwizard cup if the impostor is not revealed till then?

Does real Harry change enough to not only fool owls but also the cup? How would it treat Harry 2?

sropike
pottersparky chapter 11 . 1/15/2008
I like both chapthers. I have to say this fake harry is going be in dog house when they fine out he is fooling everyone. I wonder who this fake harry's parents were maybe death eaters or he could be muggleborn now that eat draco up knowing he was friends with a muggleborn. Maybe sirius could fine out he is harry by becomeing mark's dog and mark telling the dog the truth and his reason for not making himself known. I have hard time beliveing that snape not want to read harry potter's mind. This great that real harry see how everyone act if they know who he is and he does not want it. I think should think about training with this dark lord after him. I think people should go all the way into 4 year beliveing this is harry potter and fine out he is fake because he gets to afriad to play the part anymore. I think remus and sirius should fine out the truth but do not tell because harry does not want him to. Sirius gets harry to live with him with anyone knowing about it. I hate the idea of sirius giving this fake harry the firebolt. Sirius really loves harry and should get to know the real harry. Well update soon!
Lady Sandrilene chapter 11 . 1/15/2008
Very nice fic and excellent chapter. I am surprised that nobody figured out that 'Harry' is an imposter, but if Dumbledore didn't realize that Moody was a fake until the end, it makes sense. I can't wait to read further.
Long Lost Dream37 chapter 11 . 1/15/2008
I KNEW IT! (takes out torch and fork) HARRY 2'S A PRAT!

UPDATE SOON!
Bobmin356 chapter 11 . 1/15/2008
It is an interesting idea, however I doubt it would work despite what you think. For one thing the Goblins and the Wizards must have ways of verifying identities and family lines.

I can see this working for a year or so, but sooner or later it's going to fall apart. Especially when Dumbledore is expecting certain behaviors from Harry 2 and they aren't happening.

Mark's background is more likely to be discovered by Hermione then Dumbledore finding out he's Harry.
hiharrypotter chapter 11 . 1/15/2008
I am not sure what to think about this chapter. It's clear (no offense to you) that you want real Harry to suffer and make him look stupid. Why?

- You made him take 'Divination" again, why?

- You made him look stupid, angry and whinny (he din't show to others, but he still keeps thinking about other Harry)

- No talk about his training?

- He's not learning anything.

Just wondering.

Don't think I am flaming you (as they call it). I am just putting forth MY thoughts. I think if a story is AU then it SHOULD be AU. What's the use doing the same thing again. You made the changes in other areas, but Harry is still stupid guy. I think THAT should change more than anything else.
windlg chapter 11 . 1/15/2008
update soon
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