Reviews for The Hidden Hero
Joshbbeer chapter 23 . 6/7/2021
This was shit never once did he think to go to gringottsto check his vaults over the years
TheJamesBlonde chapter 1 . 6/5/2021
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Guest chapter 18 . 6/1/2021
Kind of disappointed in this story - was only reading up to this chapter to then switch to the "chapters 19 and onward are different" version and glad I"m not that invested so far since VERY LITTLE FROM BASIC CANON ACTIONS HAVE BEEN CHANGED.
Guest chapter 9 . 6/1/2021
Albus never did give a damn about his tool's health, did he.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/1/2021
Albus sounds like a kiddie-perv.
Guest chapter 21 . 5/30/2021
Yup. You completely screwed it up, author. Your story is now broken with little hope of repair.
Guest chapter 19 . 5/30/2021
I think you're about to completely screw up by trying to make us take this fairytale world more seriously, author. Just like the original. That's not gonna work out well. You should've dropped the silliness of first years if you wanted to have a serious story.
Guest chapter 18 . 5/30/2021
Straight into the pitfall. Maybe you'll fare better than Rowling...
Guest chapter 14 . 5/30/2021
Good going, author. Remember to not stumble into same pitfall as Rowling.
Guest chapter 10 . 5/30/2021
This is awesome, author. I applaud.
Guest chapter 5 . 5/30/2021
I hope you won't fall into the same trap as Rowling and try to turn a whimsical children's tale world into a backdrop for some dystopian drama. Because that fails and leaves the whole thing looking dumb. So far you've been doing a pretty good children's tale, author.
Guest chapter 3 . 5/30/2021
So far so good, author.
Nad19 chapter 2 . 5/27/2021
oh come on, hagrid and now the brother wand too?
Nad19 chapter 2 . 5/27/2021
why the hell hagrid is the one who came? he wasn't listed as harry..
SunPho3n1x chapter 36 . 5/21/2021
I loved this story. Thank you for writing this.
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