Horrible, he wants to keep a low profile and all he does is get noticed more... what kind of bullshit is this? Seriously, it is too convenient that he does not want to do something that he does want to do (quidich) because "he will not have time" but when it seems that a teacher wants to steal something, he decides to follow him no matter what and without notifying any teacher, even though he wants to keep "a low profile" what a nonsense story shit,

and it goes without saying that a large part of this chapter are fragments of the book that have been minimally modified... I don't know why make an AU if it's going to be almost exact to the books but with one or two changes... and surely the rest of years are the same he will mention keeping a "low profile" and end up doing all sorts of things that have nothing to do with "low profile"

and it shows that you have no imagination, you have skipped the whole year because you have no way of explaining the story if it is not with pieces of the book itself...

I just hope the next chapters are better... which I highly doubt

Very powerful.

Oh my god. May they all burn in hell

This was halfway decent until the death of Voldemort, now though? Come on! Either Harry would kill himself to free himself, or travel somewhere in the middle of the ocean to be as far from wizards as possible, or if forced into this become his own dark lord to destroy all who would harm him.

snape: always

Kidnapping is a crime. Guess not in Wizarding Britain. Harry's personal belongings are in the hotel. Lost to their hubris.

He shouldn't stay. Go to a different country.

Sirius and Remus died with out knowing Mark was Harry. Harry doesn't know how desperately they loved him.

They should have spent less time talking and more time leaving.

Never forget, never forgive for this atrocity!

What's the point of this story, seeing as it follows canon so closely? I thought I would find something interesting to read...

just because an event happened i.e Bellatrix escaping, shouldn't have made Harry get punished for something he had permission to do. and the fact that Snape didn't even think to look for Harry in Hogsmead knowing Harry told him that's where he was going is stupid and makes him look like a fool. what are you doing?

To any new readers - stop at this chapter

The author’s idea of “treatment” is mind rape and enslavement for Harry

Hello, my name is Neville Longbottom. wait, wait, wait for it...hmmf. Thanks for an entertaining story.

lol good acting he did there, pretending to be