Reviews for The Hidden Hero |
---|
![]() ![]() lol good acting he did there, pretending to be |
![]() ![]() ![]() Author pls die |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry, but this chapter is shit |
![]() ![]() ![]() Author idiot |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pathetic pathetic harry |
![]() ![]() this is a really good story! |
![]() ![]() I am sorry to say you have lost a reader...what they're doing is wrong...this is mind rape...and I cannot keep reading... I have really enjoyed this story up till this point, you are a very talented writer...and you of course have the right to write the story the way you want to write it... I will ask that you please go into to chapters like this and put in a warning...this could set some people with trauma off, thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Completely finished your great story but cannot review in Chapter 36. This is such a satisfying story showing the journey of an abused Harry Potter and how he changes and grows. It doesn’t shy away from showing that Harry is not ‘fixed’ but is on a long road. I would have loved to see more of how Harry grew after leaving Hogwarts. The characterisations and interactions are brilliant and I really enjoyed seeing how different people helped Harry on his way. Thank you for sharing your story I am sure I will be reading it again |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know Harry needs help but I have really mixed feelings about his return to the wizarding world. I think you have done a brilliant job of explaining how both sides would feel following Harry’s victory. Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Mark. I am not sure anyone could continue in these circumstances. This is such an engrossing story but so sad. Thank you for sharing your writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I knew there wouldn’t be a good ending for Harry and Sirius but I cannot tell you how much I wanted Mark to get an adult who would help him. Great writing to make me care so much. Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() An interesting twist on the CoS and the destruction of the diary. It is fascinating how Mark receives a different response than Harry. I am enjoying this take on HP and his time at Hogwarts |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how you make Dumbledores suspicions quite reasonable but also show how Harry is just trying to find his feet. Thank you for sharing your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well here I am reading your brilliant story again. I really like how you set the scene and realistically make life difficult for Harry. If he was thrown out he would struggle and he wouldn’t have access to funds. Thank you for sharing your writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Here we go, I am enjoying this immensely now. |