Reviews for The Hidden Hero
Saissa chapter 13 . 10/18/2016
So finally Mark sees Pettigrews name on the map. That encounter with Sirius and the traitor was very good.

I like the last line - a very simple threat - You are NOT Harry potter.
Just say 4 more words Mark -out loud, in public - You are Andrew Dnirson

He He He - I wonder what would Draco would say when he learns he has been consorting with a muggle born for the entire year!
Saissa chapter 12 . 10/18/2016
I do understand you using "artistic license" with regard to Harry 2's brown eyes. but you cant use it to say that the tunnel trip for Mark was 1 hour long. Hogsmeade is right next door to the school. Both he tunnel trip and the above ground walk to the village should take no more than 10-15 minutes! It is also artistic license that Mark did not discover the name of Peter Pettigrew on the map either. He He He
httpkirby chapter 36 . 10/15/2016
You have my best wishes. I love this damn story to pieces.
httpkirby chapter 26 . 10/15/2016
*frustration*
httpkirby chapter 25 . 10/15/2016
This is so f****** up.
httpkirby chapter 23 . 10/15/2016
THIS IS THE MOST EPIC FANFICTION I HAVE EVER READ. I'D LOVE TO RANT MORE ABOUT HOW AWESOME IT IS BUT I DON'T WANT TO FILL UP YOUR REVIEWS WITH MY GUSHING.
httpkirby chapter 22 . 10/15/2016
Ghhhhh, this story is so freaking great and even greater at making me suffer.
I love it.
httpkirby chapter 19 . 10/15/2016
This is actually hurting me. ;_;
jlencre chapter 36 . 10/7/2016
I enjoyed reading a unique perspective of the HP books right up to the point that you had adults kidnap a minor and then forcibly mind-rape him. And then you had an old man pay off a debt to another man, giving that other man the legal right to continue mind-raping him... oh and giving ability to compel obedience into his victim. But hey, it all turned out okay because your victim ended up with Stockholm syndrome and decided that it had all been done for his own good anyway. Hey, he's even going to keep in touch with his abusers! Oh yay! / sarcasm

Too bad Voldemort didn't kill off those sanctimonious, hypocritical bastards before Harry got there.
LyraCarina chapter 36 . 9/30/2016
I really enjoyed this story!
Lollypops101 chapter 36 . 9/24/2016
This is such an amazing story!
setokayba2n chapter 35 . 9/23/2016
It was a good story until the middle of book six. Harry seemed to suddenly lose all his intelligence, I mean, he did have wandless magic and never used it in the hospital to escape, he could change himself and he did not. He could very well 'apparate' away from the restaurant.

He could also very well shout in the middle of the great hall or Diagon Alley that the ministry decreed that he, the savior of the Wizarding World was going to be the slave because of Dumbledore after they drugged him.

After that it lost the interesting part and it become the 'happy ending'
ProditorMagnus chapter 36 . 9/18/2016
Well, first part was enjoyable at least.
ProditorMagnus chapter 31 . 9/18/2016
Yes! Let Bella kill Harry and have the torment be over.
ProditorMagnus chapter 17 . 9/15/2016
Eh? Ron? Again Dumbledore trying to attack Harrys reputation I suppose.
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