Reviews for The Hidden Hero
Guest chapter 23 . 4/4
I really like that Harry used so much psychological warfare with the psycho :)
M
Guest chapter 22 . 4/4
Although "lay low" has had it's down sides up to now, honestly it is a solid strategy at this point.
What a mess :/
M
Guest chapter 20 . 4/4
*shudders*
that was facking horrible, Harry's nightmares just keep piling up :(
M
Guest chapter 19 . 4/4
Ugh... so, nobody knows how to do Prior Incantatum on Diggory's wand?
Truth potion?
grr.
I'll see where you take this.
M
Guest chapter 13 . 4/3
Nice! Didn't see it happening this way, going to be really wild to see how you develop this!
M
Guest chapter 12 . 4/3
I'm loving how you are handling Harry 2.
I've got a similar concept in my head, and any angles I can read can only help solidify my own ideas :)
Plus, it's really funny how easy it is to see just how things 'might have been'.
M
Guest chapter 6 . 4/3
I think I am most impressed by two things:
Harry, while still impulsive, is fairly unsettled in his opinions. This makes much more sense than making a judgement (in, Dumbledore is bad) and ignoring further experience.
Second, Gryffindor lost the house cup. Without Harry as seeker, they had no chance!
Enjoying the tale,
M
Guest chapter 5 . 4/3
Really fun!
The story really does a good job most of the time just jumping into an event and then moving to the next one.
Not much character development yet, but their 11, so I guess that's to be expected :D
M
Guest chapter 4 . 4/3
Well done, lots of character dev and backgrounding!
M
Guest chapter 3 . 4/3
Still having fun, looking forward to seeing where you take this :)
M
Guest chapter 1 . 4/3
Nice start!
M
The Purple Sheep chapter 36 . 4/2
Wow! I can't believe that's the end! That was probably the best fanfiction I have ever read I hope you have written a sequel. Amazing thank you for such a great well written story
sfjoellen chapter 26 . 3/31
I've enjoyed your story until the indenture part. I'd have gotten past that but Snape? I'm out, thanks for the story.
Milliza chapter 36 . 3/22
Harry should have joined the muggles. Between the two, the wizarding world treated him worse. Let them all rot.
Milliza chapter 36 . 3/22
Harry should have joined the muggles. Between the two, the wizarding world treated him worse. Let them all rot.
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