|Reviews for The Sky Fell While We Were Talking|
| Defying.Expectations chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
What a wonderful missing moment. I'm amazed how well you are able to get inside Dexter's layered and often unfeeling psyche . . . how you capture that unfeeling so well while still making him *feel*. It's beautiful. Lovely job.
| clow-san chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Man. How did you do that? You totally captured Dexter in that strange feeling-unfeeling entity that he is around Rita. It's a lovely job.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
i love this story. *sigh* i miss rita.
| new2dexter chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
Nicely done. You really captured the relationship between Dexter and Rita. True to Dexter's character, the sarcastic self talk was just right.
All round good job!
| Fire From Above chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Good job showing Dexter's emerging emotion.
| Pirate chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
I don't know if I already reviewed this a while back... but based on the fact that I'm able to review I'd guess that I haven't. So, anywho, the point of this long winded message is that I adore this little one-shot. It is genius. It is perfectly and believably written and it is just wonderful. I added it to my favorites ages ago and just reread it tonight. Still lovely. I'll have to check out your other stuff. Keep writing like this.
| David Fishwick chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
I liked how you wrote Dexter, Rita. Thanks for writing.
| IloveOrlando08 chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
This was great! I loved the titles for the facial expressions that he comes up with!
| Madaboutthementalist chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
Oh, very very very good. One hundred percent authentic Dexter. Enjoyed it very much!
| DangerousDiamondDarling chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
| A Very Neat Monster chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
I really like this. I think you strike just the right balance between Dexter being sociopathic/manipulative and sincere. It's always interesting to see Dexter try to make sense of his own emotions, or even to recognize them as such when he has them.
| Alamo Girl chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Okay. I have nothing really constructive to say at this moment other than: GUH! Wow. You truly have a way with words and an undeniable tallent for capturing a character who supposedly feels nothing, in such an emotional way.
The show writers would be impressed, hell, I think Michael C. Hall would be impressed. I certainly am.
Please write more for Dexter!
| Mike Bryant chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
Great story. The new Rita, stronger and more assertive, unknowingly leading Dexter down a path that could destroy her if he were to actually tell her the truth. But as you said, telling the truth without really telling the truth. Dexter needs to vent.
| Fists chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
This is just beautifully written. I'm new to the show, Dexter, but I'm already a huge fan and you've captured his voice perfectly in the piece! Great job!
| simbagirl chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
Thank you! The first good Dexter fanfic Ive read.