This... Is amazing. Reasonable explanations for Naruto's noncanon powers and some weakness to back it enough that it can't be a Mary Sue story. Nice use of words in the chapter.

See you in the last chapter. :)
-Sound

Wow! Awesome! Like the two teammates. Fellow outcasts eh? They'll be awesome friends. Is Rei related to Tenten, I wonder? Smetimes Tenten has the surname Higurashi, aftferall.

Haha! Naruto is so cool here :D hmm, I kind of like Tenten. If it's not Hinata, I'd rather it be Tenten. She's the most sensible of the lot afterall. Anyway I'm interested to see where this will go!

I don't like the fact that you gave rei minatos jutsu it's only supposed to be for naruto I don't hate your story I think it was a well thought out. Keep making good story's

About what you said in chapter 8, Chakra did not exist before the six realms Sage. His mom was the first one to have chakra. She gained it by eating the chakra fruit. And he inherited it. And by the way, he is actually called the sage of the six paths.

I saw your disclaimer for chapter one. Was that a shino impression?

Well it ended unexpectedly but thanks for the effort.

I would just like to inform you that tobriama senju was the real creator of the shadow clone jutsu/kage bushin no jutsu

Have you started On your sequel yet?

There is a small mistake, the Nidaime Hokage created the Kage Bunshin no Jutsu

In the sumary it says that naruto dojutsu is equal to the other three. If the abilities listed above is as far as it goes then I'd say that you are full of shit

i must say i enjoy read this story even it was relased so long ago ... 6 years pass and i wonder if u still plan to write sequel ? after i finished reading this i plan to check few of your other stories ;)

great story and i liked it.

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE!

What about naruto x ino