Reviews for The Fourth Dojutsu
Hades Darkstar chapter 19 . 5/19
Please write a sequel to this story.
Wolf chapter 2 . 3/28
When I was the dojustu name I read it a Rasangen
Roberto Rivera chapter 1 . 3/3
Interting story
Guest chapter 1 . 1/9
godly what if
yindragonkiba chapter 19 . 12/27/2021
Loved it
r6.fizzz chapter 1 . 12/5/2021
Keeping this short.

Writing style is awful and reminiscing of a robot.

Naruto is a child, not an adult who speaks with perfect grammar. He is twelve and no matter who it is, no one can gain the vocabulary/speech/thought process of an adult in a year.

Writing contains unnecessary words. One example is seen in chapter one. “Unlike other teachers who liked to hang out in the lounge during this time of day, Iruka liked to catch up on grading his student’s homework after he ate his lunch,” as you can see this sentence is long and has way too much glue words

You could change it to this. “Unlike other teachers, Iruka preferred to grade student’s homework during lunch”

This might not pose much of a difference in one sentence, however with multiple it builds up.

It seems our author has just written the story only considering grammar, not style.

Could go on about the plot, however, that is a waste of time. (Keep in mind I haven’t read the future chapters once I have, I will alter this review)
TENSURATHAT TI chapter 1 . 12/4/2021
Is meggido taken from tensura.
Dasgun chapter 1 . 9/27/2021
о.о
Hideki Takahashi chapter 6 . 9/4/2021
uh idk what world you think this takes place in but the naruto verse doesn't have police
ziialemon chapter 1 . 7/24/2021
Tenten ou hanabi se for uma garota que você procura, mas se for yaoi talvez neji,shino,shikamaru ou gaara
Uzumaky clan chapter 4 . 6/30/2021
Great chapter thank you for your wonderful work
Uzumaky clan chapter 3 . 6/29/2021
Great chapter thank you for your wonderful work
Uzumaky clan chapter 2 . 6/29/2021
Great chapter thank you for your wonderful work
Uzumaky clan chapter 1 . 6/29/2021
Great chapter thank you for your wonderful work. And what do you think about a Naruto/Temari romance pleas
Guest chapter 2 . 6/14/2021
amazing just amazing
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