|Reviews for Holding Destiny With Your Own Two Hands|
| YazzyFic chapter 17 . 3/12
Man, I sobbed and cried so much when Sakura died and the following reactions in this chapter. You are EVIL. Ahaha. Hope you update this fic soon. I don't want it to end!
| SnowBlizzard chapter 18 . 2/25
Three and a half years later, and I still remember this story. Might just read the whole thing over again from start to finish rather than to skip to my favorite parts.
| Radiant Celestial Aura chapter 18 . 2/22
Very Unique Time-Travel Story! I hope you update again soon! :D
| deathnoteno1fan-codegeasslover chapter 18 . 2/16
Aww I want to read what happens next!
| Guest chapter 18 . 2/10
Awsome keep going its great cant wait to read more so update please.
| CrimsonEyedKitsune chapter 18 . 2/5
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE! This fanfic has made me Smile, Laugh and Cry(CRY ALOT)! Your a great writer and I would really like to know what happens next!
| Meh chapter 1 . 1/23
I got about halfway through this chapter before I got... I don't want to say "sick", but annoyed. Sakura's rival Youruchi, was it? Taunting her, and Sakura not killing her? Sakura is Jounin, and it's war time. People know that bad, soul staining things happen during war, and fighting off "dark" impulses should not be the first priority during a fight with someone who means her village harm.
Another thing- this is too lighthearted. I know that not everyone likes angst, but some settings require it. Would it feel right if someone was making jokes at a funeral? No- it's disrespectful, really.
The same thing applies here even more so. People are actively dying, and Kiba and Shino are making happy little bets about who can take down the most people- this itself isn't too bad, but it shouldn't be written like it's all fun and games to them. It's psychotic, and should be written as such.
The review for this story seemed interesting, but these issues make it nearly unreadable for me.
| Kingofclubs8129 chapter 18 . 1/7
Im loving this and cant wait to see more.
| Raion to the Rescue chapter 18 . 1/3
Oh please please update! This is an amazing story and it's just getting more interesting!
| chibi-sempai chapter 18 . 12/21/2013
Well? Where's the rest? Img this is soooo good... Please don't just end it here.
| Guest chapter 16 . 11/30/2013
| angel chapter 18 . 11/22/2013
love the story wish you would continue
| Mw chapter 18 . 11/7/2013
It really, probably would be best if kyuubi was revealed into Naruto at this point. Anything else is just; you're right, it's anti-climatic. I could see where you were going with this but was never really sure. All-together, though, it's an awesome story!
| Floranna chapter 18 . 10/30/2013
I decided to re-read this when random bits of these started to pop up in my head and it was starting to become VERY distracting.
I do love this fic and the way you write all the characters. I am really worried though that Naruto wasn't conceived, or did he just miscalculate the day? I mean, babies are ery often born not on due date, so the counting could be off...
Itachi is so adorable here, and I am interested on where you will go with Shinsei. And at what point they will travel back, will it be before they were born or something? And if they go after, will they emerge (is that the right word) withtheir alternate parts, has Sakura already travelled there or is she truly gone...
What is the situation with this fic now, BTW?
| Another Anonymous Annoyance chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
One of the best Time travel stories that i've read. Definitly a favourite!