| Reviews for Holding Destiny With Your Own Two Hands |
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  Ember chapter 18 . 1/11 Author-chan, this story is AMAZING please don't leave it high and dry... -_- (giant puppy dog eyes) 0_0 |
| Ember chapter 17 . 1/11 You do have some spelling mistakes, and I get it 'Ruto's POV and all that. If Naruto lost the Kyuubi, couldn't they seal him back into Naruto? |
| Ember chapter 16 . 1/11 As a martial artist I definitely can agree, a two minute spar wears you out pretty quickly, let alone ten. I really hope you bring Naruto back somehow... |
| Ember chapter 15 . 1/10 I would like an explanation as to why the Massacre almost happened a lot sooner, I still don't quite get that. |
| Ember chapter 14 . 1/10 The outtake should go in crack fic, that's where it belongs! XD Also, cough Sasuke, cough cough. |
| Ember chapter 13 . 1/10 I think both of the scenes were good, thank you so much for writing! |
| Ember chapter 12 . 1/10 He can only be a chibi 'Kashi if he says "Ja ne!" with an eye smile as he runs away. The last answer is the correct one. |
| Ember chapter 11 . 1/10 Temari-chan is so kawaii! I can't wait to see baby Gaara! |
| Ember chapter 10 . 1/10 Ka-ka-shi, if you weren't my favorite character, I would strangle you! (furious muttering) |
| Ember chapter 9 . 1/10 Very amusing Author-chan! 'Kashi pranking Kakashi was awesome! |
| Ember chapter 8 . 1/10 Please don't kill Itachi, I do think he is salvage/save-able. Now Naruto just needs to play matchmaker for his parents. ;) |
| Ember chapter 7 . 1/9 Kakashi, you did not just call yourself by the wrong name like an old geezer! XD |
| Ember chapter 6 . 1/9 Oh no Minato, you are jumping to very far conclusions, also, Minato is from a primarily civilian clan, if I remember right, however I like your idea. Good-bye canon! In with the AU! |
| Ember chapter 5 . 1/9 This is good, although the Sandaime's first name is Hiruzen, not Sasuke, I have forgotten who Uchiha is named after, he is named after like one of the founders of the village, I think. You have a few spelling things too, and slight keyboard misses. (when you hit the key next to the one you meant to) |
| Ember chapter 4 . 1/9 If you like Shino and Shikamaru you would like Can You See Me Now, by DarthGumdrop. Naruto Uzumaki was a mass of conflicting fronts and ideas. He was loud and stupid, but shy and intelligent. He was sunny and always smiling but wept in the silence of his room. What will happen when he catches the attention of T&I's Ibiki, and his two new teammates? Will they be able to unravel the complex web of disguises that Naruto has woven? Watch and see. |