Reviews for Holding Destiny With Your Own Two Hands
The Writing Prokaryote chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
I'm torn between wanting to kill Danzo first or wanting to kill orochimaru first...darn that is a really troublesome decision...
Saturnblu chapter 18 . 5/6/2014
I personally enjoyed this story very much. It's so much better for more than one party to share the burden than carry the burden by him/herself. Naruto will have to be more careful not to die carelessly since he doesn't have his future Kyuubi any more. I figure eventually all these people who came from the future may be will die one way or another to save the past in order to change the out come and make the future a better place. They still have to deal with the Uchiha problem, the old councilors, Kyuubi & Madara, Madara & Akatasuki, and perhaps full fill the prophesy.

Since Obito is not Madara from the original canon story line it may be some one else entirely or some how Madara got someone else and became Madara number XX. Either way the time line is mostly kept the same and easier to prevent or change for the better. Whether the Uchiha problem will change into something else or be still detained one way another it will still affect Konoha and remaining Uchiha family. I hope chibi Itachi did not have to make the same choice he had to choose as the the one in canon story line. It's rather sad for his path but he died as a hero and earned his accomplishments.

It's fun to see Minato and Naruto face off with Tsunade throw in between. lol
It's fun to guess the relationship between the people that came to past and to see the complicated outlook into their lives that is not completely easy to discern. There is always potholes in story such as time travel unless you have personal experience there is no way to discern exactly what would happen and with precision too. With scientific movies it give people some ideas as what would have to happen in time travel to work past and future or future and past. Either way it's fun to read about the bond that came from hardship and friendship never deteriorate after all the mess been done with or new relationship from the past to future to create some sort of balance for both parties involved for a brighter future. There may always be suspicion to be involved but as long as it's best for the village it will be okay.
Good work.
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threeeyedcrow chapter 17 . 3/12/2014
Man, I sobbed and cried so much when Sakura died and the following reactions in this chapter. You are EVIL. Ahaha. Hope you update this fic soon. I don't want it to end!
SnowBlizzard chapter 18 . 2/25/2014
Three and a half years later, and I still remember this story. Might just read the whole thing over again from start to finish rather than to skip to my favorite parts.
Radiant Celestial Aura chapter 18 . 2/22/2014
Very Unique Time-Travel Story! I hope you update again soon! :D
deathnoteno1fan-codegeasslover chapter 18 . 2/16/2014
Aww I want to read what happens next!
Guest chapter 18 . 2/10/2014
Awsome keep going its great cant wait to read more so update please.
CrimsonEyedKitsune chapter 18 . 2/5/2014
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE! This fanfic has made me Smile, Laugh and Cry(CRY ALOT)! Your a great writer and I would really like to know what happens next!
Meh chapter 1 . 1/23/2014
I got about halfway through this chapter before I got... I don't want to say "sick", but annoyed. Sakura's rival Youruchi, was it? Taunting her, and Sakura not killing her? Sakura is Jounin, and it's war time. People know that bad, soul staining things happen during war, and fighting off "dark" impulses should not be the first priority during a fight with someone who means her village harm.

Another thing- this is too lighthearted. I know that not everyone likes angst, but some settings require it. Would it feel right if someone was making jokes at a funeral? No- it's disrespectful, really.
The same thing applies here even more so. People are actively dying, and Kiba and Shino are making happy little bets about who can take down the most people- this itself isn't too bad, but it shouldn't be written like it's all fun and games to them. It's psychotic, and should be written as such.

The review for this story seemed interesting, but these issues make it nearly unreadable for me.

Akashic Vinyl chapter 18 . 1/7/2014
Im loving this and cant wait to see more.
Tonaro chapter 18 . 1/3/2014
Oh please please update! This is an amazing story and it's just getting more interesting!
chibi nee-san chapter 18 . 12/21/2013
Well? Where's the rest? Img this is soooo good... Please don't just end it here.
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