Great chapter. i'm really liking your writing style and am glad to see the story start to pick up. It was good.

Sounds interesting. By the way, does anyone know who Naruto's parents were. If not they will shocked after Kyuubi is stopped and Namikaze Naruto enters the scene.

This is pretty good so far and original as far as I know. I hope you continue it.

wow... this is great

interesting. love to see where this goes.

Holy crap! That was so freakin amazing! (favs and alerts)

PLZ UPDATE!

This is good but what about Neji and Tenten? Sasuke NO! but well written update soon.

That was such an amazing chapter. i can't wait to see what happens next. This was so thrilling, please just update this as soon as possible. bring on the next chapter.

Damn. Oro-teme in Sasuke's body... Not a really good picture, if thought of it THAT way, but I'm not, anymore that is... *shudders* Anywho, awesome fic, and keep going. I think this will get better.

Whoa...THAT WAS THE MOST ACTION-PACKED ONE SHOT I'VE EVER READ!

Wonderful! But how come Neji nor TenTEn was mentioned in the entire thing?

i think becoming a merchant that visit several hidden villages will just put them in deeper investigation by the hidden villages, especially at time of war and they're just starting, so not many will trust them to give them any real good information. the idea is interesting though.

well... it will be hard on me to wait for the next chapter ...

But seeing the first chapters I can say it is definitely worth the wait _

eagerly waiting ... see ya next chapter

To be honest, I liked it. Very good. Nice and long. Post the next chapter ASAP, please.

awesome!

but what happen to the twins?

love how you somewhat and yet didn't change sai's personality, and i bet his banner was very pretty!