|Reviews for Devotion|
| sinkfloridasink chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
Yes, I do love you. (:
Since I can't send messages yet I'm having to review your fics. Keep in mind I'm not reading this one because I have no background information whatsoever about Sweeney Todd (but I will still proof them for you before you throw them on here).
I got a new AIM screen name - it's the same as my pen name on here, but the L in "slump" is really a capital I. That way it looks like "sophmore slump" in your buddylist...get it? (;
I'm trying to keep my head on Godspeed, but it's pretty hard. Half of me wants to throw up the first couple chapters this week (I'm on spring break) but the other half wants me to wait till I get about halfway through the fic, which seems more reasonable. But I miss having people review my fics and send me words of encouragement, which helped me get to where I was with No One Knows (on my account MuteMath788...damn, that's old).
Hit me up on AIM when you get this. (:
| sinkfloridasink chapter 10 . 4/4/2008
Hello, dear. I believe we have met before...
Guess who? ;)
| lina chapter 10 . 3/28/2008
great chapter!i just loved mrs lovett's reaction!write more soon!
| andaere chapter 10 . 3/27/2008
That's all I have to say...
(My brain isn't working right now. Just take all these understatements and amplify them by one hundred, and that's how I really feel. Yeah. That made sense.)
| The Nightingale's Song chapter 9 . 2/19/2008
So good! I've often wondering how Mrs. Lovett could bring herself to butcher human corpses…your story offers a bloody plausible explanation. Good work.
Looking forward to the next update—but take your time. Like you said, no use in writing a mediocre chap (though I'm not sure if that's possible for you) just to update quicker.
| Viva-taquitos chapter 9 . 2/17/2008
hookay. not as bad as i thought it would be.
while reading this, i remembered how amazing you wrote mrs. lovett- from her mannerisms to her vocabulary. great job.
| xlawa chapter 9 . 2/16/2008
Great chapter, I like the way you described Toby and Mrs. Lovett's struggle with her first...body. Haha.
Good job :)
| andaere chapter 9 . 2/15/2008
Don't worry about the wait between the updates, life gets in the way, and at least you're updating! )
Also, the chapters are worth it.
Aw, Toby's so sweet and in character. And Mrs. Lovett having a conscience? That's an interesting idea... Never crossed my mind before... xD
You write very well, with beautiful imagery. Good job!
| iDepp chapter 8 . 2/9/2008
YOU NED TO UPDATE!
| Aline Anais chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
I love your writing style; it's beautiful, so please update soon!
| Viva-taquitos chapter 8 . 1/26/2008
Aw, you did a good job, babe. A very good job. It went over very smoothly. I didn't even noticed the missing of the waltz until you mentioned it, so I don't think that's a big issue.
I found out Mrs. Lovett's first name was Nellie through looking through IMDB...how did you find it out? Out of curiosity.
| andaere chapter 8 . 1/26/2008
Don't worry, I understand taking out the dance, it doesn't make sense in your story. Even if Sweeney was really overexcited and drunk it still wouldn't make sense... So I don't hate you for taking out the dance. But man, I love that part in the movie... )
Good chapter! I like how Nellie struggles with herself at the idea of cannibism, because personally I find it disgusting and revolting and unethical and I could go on and on, but it's nice to know Mrs. Lovett had at least SOME doubts.
It always did scare me how excited Todd gets about the cannibalism idea... xD Update soon!
| Sanguinary Tears chapter 8 . 1/26/2008
This was an amazing chapter even if there was no waltz scene. But I really think you did a great job without including it.
| smashing chapter 8 . 1/26/2008
I never imagined the dance as an actual, full-fledged *dance* in, er, "real life," but more as just a few happy twirls around the kitchen fueled by gin and excitement. Anyway, I liked this chapter! It's really hard to translate the over-the-top broadway-ness of a musical into prose (some people can't help having the characters burst out into song, even in their stories), and I think you've done a really good job so far.
| xlawa chapter 7 . 1/15/2008
AHH I'm excited for A little priest :D