|Reviews for Pro Ball Career|
| R-Gomeni chapter 4 . 1/18/2010
An awesome story, just because of how interesting and original it was. It also raises the question of whether Dean would ever be happy as 'normal'- and answers it well. Basically, a fantastic story overall that I enjoyed reading. Thanks for writing it!
| Korilian chapter 4 . 4/29/2009
I'm not really into baseball or supernatural, but with an author I love I'm always happy to step outside my usual fandom bounds. It was well worth the trip.
| sally sparrow chapter 4 . 6/16/2008
wow. good story. really good story:)I havent bothered to review a story in ages, but when I read this one I just couldnt resist:P please write more! pretty please with a cherry on top?
| Here's Hoping chapter 4 . 1/31/2008
First of all, you're awesome. This story was amazing, and amusing. Second of all, I really wana slap Sam upside the head. It would be really great to see a one-shot sequel to this. Like maybe Dean seeing Will again or something...but hey, it's your choice. Again, really enjoyable. Thanks for sharing it with us!
| Karialena chapter 4 . 1/15/2008
Loved the story, especially the parts about how quickly Dean caught on to the way the game is played, and the fact that you realized that with his childhood, those 'normal' things might be a little alien to him. I don't think Dean is given enough credit (especially by JOHN, but let's not go there) for the way he can adapt to almost any situation, and how smart he is even though he didn't go to college. (If you can't tell, yes, I'm a Dean girl) The only thing I might have changed was right at the end...maybe let Sam get glimpse of Dean in the game, but not enough to be sure. While he doubts it he thinks about calling Dean, then decides it couldn't be him...After all Dean can't do normal. Oh, great character in Will...nice for Dean to make a friend for a change who helps him and wants nothing but his friendship in return. Keep up the good work!
| lilgurlgreen chapter 4 . 1/15/2008
Awesome! I feel bad for Dean- wish he could've stayed and played! Great job! :D
| Rechel chapter 4 . 1/15/2008
I really enjoyed reading this. You have a good grasp of the character's voices and a nice pace. It also helps that you update frequently. I also like the nice, believable and understated Dean angst. The scene after the game where John comes and tells him that they're leaving and Dean just says "yes, sir" was just so perfect and yet so depressing. Excellent work.
| Sue Pokorny chapter 4 . 1/15/2008
Loved it! I think having Sam appear in the end, and completely missing that his brother had such talent is such a nice touch. I wonder what would happen if Dean ran into his new friend Will, after Will made it to the Majors? That would be an interesting story from Sam's point of view.
Thanks for the story - I thoroughly enjoyed it!
| Poppyflake chapter 4 . 1/15/2008
Great chapter. Shame that Sam never saw the game - any chance of Dean meeting up with Will again and Sam finding out about it all? Really enjoyed this one and thanks for posting.
| I'mcalledZorro chapter 4 . 1/14/2008
A excellent story. It flowed really well. It was a shame that Sam didn't see his brother play. Great job.
| deangirl1 chapter 4 . 1/14/2008
My ONLY disappointment with this story is that it had to end at homebase... This was awesome - very original and extremely well written - awesome plot and perfect characterizations. Loved how you portrayed the strained relationship between John and Dean. And poor Dean's foray into normalcy - really heartbreaking on one level - and skillfully and subtley done... Now I'm hoping for Dean to actually call Will and end up on his doorstep... Sequel? Please? Nice touch to end with Sam just missing the game - kind of Sam all over... And finally - baseball!Dean - damn - almost too sexy to bear...
| rower4life chapter 4 . 1/14/2008
I loved it. Excellent story and plot. I loved the bar seen and Dean pucking. You managed to get the characters dead on too. I could actually see this as an episode. That is, if John wasn't dead. Anyway I loved it and can't wait to check out some more of your work.
| lostatc chapter 4 . 1/14/2008
Great. You're right, the game would have slowed down the pace. You covered it all so well. I'd love to read a reunion story where Sam realizes that he missed Dean's game and that his friends knew a friend of Deans...hoping, hoping, hoping. Great story, thank you.
| SometimesAlways chapter 3 . 1/14/2008
Woo! I am loving this story :) Simply can't wait for the next chapter :). I'm lovin Dean playin' ball. :P Ghosties and a taste of normalcy all in one :D . Not somethhing I'd'a ever thought of being written but damn, if I ain't glad you chose to write this piece :) Your writing style is fluent, flowing, fantastically fabulous! Great balance of dialogue and exposition :)
AWESOME! and a total thumbs-up for this one :)
| WWDWD chapter 3 . 1/12/2008
Another awesome chapter. Loved it!