Reviews for Breakthrough
StarStrewn chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
This was so perfect! Ahh, best conversation between Jim and Pam ever. I love this. I love you for writing this.
bingbangboom714 chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
I love it!
onetreefan chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
very good! :] loved the update
Dee8907 chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
Wow, I really love this story. It's so good and really focuses on some loopholes of this storyline.
gnbrules chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
Wow, great work. I really enjoyed it. :)
Wish I was Mrs. Danes 117 chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
How does this story only have TWO reviews? It was awesome! I loved it! You got the characters spot on! I'm really impressed! GREAT JOB!
happiness5678 chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
I really loved this! Pam putting Jim in his place was very inspiring...and I loved the way it was written. And the ending was perfect; very subtle and not corny or anything. Good job!
maddikinz940 chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
aw this was really really good. The whole ravishing excuse for kelly was completeley hilarious. I could not stop laughing. It was so funny. I loved the confrontation. But i wish Jim would have gotten more spite for not coming to the art show. but still fantastic story