|Reviews for Hexx|
| alexlovemetal chapter 10 . 5/24/2009
It's been a really long time since you last updated this story... Please go on, it's very interesting. I like very much this fic. Please.
| kirster226 chapter 10 . 10/25/2008
Oh my gosh. Your story is amazing. I couldn't stop reading it. I love it. I'm sad though that you haven't updated since March, and I really want to know what will happen. If you've decided to stop writing this story could you at least give me a brief summary of how it ends?
| tlegal91 chapter 10 . 10/10/2008
i love this story
its very different from others and i like that!
one question, what timeline is this set in? im a bit confused...
| AllyR chapter 10 . 8/5/2008
This story is unbelievable. Truly, it's so well written and just...*sigh* there are no words for how much I love it. I love the intensity, the danger, the complexity, the romance, the emotion of it all. I just adore everything about it. Please, please update SOON!
| Quiet Lullaby chapter 10 . 7/24/2008
Doesn't look like you're going to keep this story up, but if you do, it really is probably my favorite fanfiction of Twilight I have ever read. It's really brilliant, I think you captured Edward really well which can't be said for a lot of stories I've read.
| cowza chapter 10 . 7/24/2008
Interesting story! I hope you keep writing it, even though it has been a while. I want to know what happens!
| I love Ferrari California's chapter 10 . 7/20/2008
I think Aro really would be cruel like he is in your fanfiction.
This is one of my favorite stories that I've read. I don't pick my favorites easily, either. It's just that this one shows that Edward and Bella's differences are so much stronger in the books, as well as any other fanfiction I've read, yet they still make it through. They still find love. It just gets weird when you're writing in past tense, and then you switch to present.
I can't imagine Charlie's pain when he gets the message that Bella is dead, even though she isn't. Does he still live in a castle and all that?
Anyhow, back to other things. The plot is very original. Originality is a great thing. There are so many cliched plots, it's not even funny anymore. 'Bella gets pregnant', 'Bella is the new girl at school, and Edward is the playboy.' There are just so /many/ of those!
Anyhow. Sorry, I tend to get off topic. -_- Edward still has the same personality, Alice is flamboyant as ever, and Carlisle is the kind, gentle person he's known for. Hexx really is a great story. I read the author's note in a previous chapter, and you said that there's a possibility that you're going to delete it. I hope you decided that you aren't!
I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
Oh! One more thing. I was curious as to how you come up with the chapter titles. How do you think of them? One more thing; I promise! What are the poems from at the ends of the previous chapters?
Talk to you later!
| Just Call Me Mrs Lupin chapter 10 . 6/25/2008
i really like this story!
you are an amazing writer
keep it up PLEASE
update as soon as possible
just call me mrs lupin
| Paige susan chapter 7 . 6/25/2008
Oh my goodness. I feel terrible. The next chapter really explained everything, sorry about the earlier review.
| Paige Susan chapter 4 . 6/25/2008
Okay, I absolutely love this story. One thing though, this seems like the setting is in the past sometime, and you used a word like Robot. Just pointing it out. Clone too, that really wasn't around then
| Tears of Mercury chapter 10 . 5/30/2008
Well, you mentioned that you'd like reviews from those putting you on story alert and favorite lists, and since I'd want the same I can hardly deny you. :) Besides that, it would be incredibly indecent of me not to review such a well-written story.
I like your style in this. It's very tight and compact, and the narration is close enough to that of the books that while this world Bella and Edward find themselves in is so unfamiliar, while they themselves are very unfamiliar, it isn't much of a stretch for me to imagine them here. Bella is darker, yes, and perhaps much harder than the one most people are used to - but there are "fingerprints" of the original all over her. As for Edward, I think he's as near to a perfect portrayal as any I've read in a Twilight fanfic so far.
Maybe what I like most about this story is that I don't think of it as a fanfic when I'm reading it. The premise is very far removed from that of the books, so of course that helps contribute to the overall original feeling, but it's also the style. You said in one of your Author's Notes that you aren't very happy with this and plan on editing quite a bit; as a reader, I think that you've earned the right for me to trust your judgement implicitly for any story changes, but I personally don't think it's all that rough to begin with.
On a side note, I just want to thank you, thank you, THANK YOU for not making Edward the vomit-inducing "Q". I was very sure that he wasn't, and that along with your writing was largely the reason I kept reading past my irrational fear - but in the back of my mind I had the terrible suspsicion that Edward might turn out to be him or some other equally hideous character. Instead you've made him believable, and with the irony of the cannon Edward, he's also very human here. His ideals are black and white, but the actual man is so many different shades of grey...
Just as a heads-up, the last Bella POV before this one - I think it was "Our Divinity Knows No Bounds" - is largely written in present tense instead of past tense. It's probably not a big deal to anyone else, but I noticed because I've done the same thing with so many of my third person stories. I hope I don't sound like a whiny nit-picker, I just thought that in case you were intending to edit as you go along you might want to know.
Overall, I this is probably my favorite Twific that I've read so far. You're doing very well, and I hope to see an update from you soon!
| lostxinxtwilightx chapter 10 . 5/27/2008
Another great story! I'm really into it, it's amazingly writen and well thought out. You always come up with interesting subjects and plots. So update quick!
| truehazel chapter 10 . 5/17/2008
this story is beautiful. I love that Bella is strong and smart. I like that she's proud.
| morrisdee chapter 10 . 5/3/2008
it does have some similarities to Cygnus, but in all they are on two different worlds.
i love the story because it's told in such a beautiful writing voice, and its so senusual and innocent at the same time. just like Twilight.
i love it.
update soon, please. :)
| enigmaofherself chapter 10 . 4/19/2008
Yours is a talent rarely seen on this site, or anywhere else. Professional, sophisticated, eloquent, flowing and smooth. You are the Edward Cullen of writers. Yours is not a story, but a series of scenes playing out in front of my own eyes.
Basically, I love reading your fanfictions, and this one is truly amazing. Can't wait to see an update.