Hahaha this was great xD

I feel like Ashe would make a really good evil mastermind. I'm glad that we're on the same side.

my cheeks hurt from laughing so much!

...okay, ngl, I hated Final Fantasy XII :

But I love this! You made all of the characters so amusing and funny and this is awesome. Yeah. You're awesome. :D

I frikin love this fic, keep it up. I would be pissed if someone took my awesome Garif mask too.

Oh my good gracious! This is amazingly fab! It's like a mixture of the "Confessions of Georgia Nickleson" and The most b.a. game ever! Absolutely awesome! Keep it coming!

He he cute! I love this "I want the desert back." Priceless :)

haha, that's cute! I love how you've painted Penelo to be an average immature young teenager :) Which in my mind she would be!

no what happened to her mask D: lol i love this. it is such a neat and unique perspective of the events of the game. i look forward to more!

Puh-lease, Vaan's sole purpose of existence is as the scapegoat, the fall-boy, the idiot everyone loves...

...to hate.

Love your humour! Marlboro vine spaghetti, ey?

~Z

This is good stuff...read it all at once today though. Is this just a humor thing, or a Penelo/Balthier or Penelo/Vaan thing?

Yay I'm glad you've updated this it's been too long :D I don't even read anything on this site any more but I came back to read this cos it's always a good lol. Hope you write another one some time!

Yay, you're back!

I lol'd my way through this entire chapter. It was so awesome to see how they all relate to each other in such a funny way.

Also, this line rules all: "I feel like Ashe would make a really good evil mastermind. I'm glad that we're on the same side."

Loved it! :)

Wow! It has been a while.

Anyway, this gave me some much needed giggles. Love the idea of Basch and those chocobos *evil grin*

Haha! Poor Penelo.

I'd rather she and Vaan suffered together. Not only does the comparison of whining make much hilarity, but the fact that a wet flying suit can stick even further to a growing body and knock out inquisitive young men should also prove amusing.

This was horribly entertaining in a really good way. I rarely laugh out loud at what I read, but for this story I did, so...yeah.

I think you did a very good job on the portrayal of Penelo and her teenage woes, while keeping the humour in the story and following the plot. Penelo is really fleshed out, which makes me a happy reader because I like real characters.

Please, please, please update.

This is actually really great! Made me laugh several times. Sad to see it's been a year since an update, and hoping a review will motivate another out of you.