What a beautiful ending! At times I found myself irritated with Kakashi because he seemed like he was obsessed with Sakura's looks. But as I read the chapters I came to realize his feelings were much more deeper than that. The love is so strong it makes your gut clench. How wonderful!

I don't know what to do after reading such a beautiful piece. Reading another book will feel cheap after this!

I thought this story would be too awkward to read. How wrong I was! I loved the training and Kakashi as the instructor. It was very well done!

Poor poor Sakura. If I had to strip dance to my teachers I'd jump off a cliff. But then again, my school never had hot teachers like Kakashi.

I have never in my entire time of reading fan fiction come into contact with a story that had any sex scenes that quite literally leave my entire body buzzing! This is freaking crazy! And the tension between the two of them... fuck! Great job!

Sakura was basically raped. Boi, I can't.. I don't.. I'm so speechless.

When Kakashi teaching her how to lap dance, I was like : "No Kakashi, she's just a child" Hahahahaha.

That was an amazing story. I found it so hard to put down :) would love to know what happened after with girls and all :) love it so well written

Thank you! It was a wild ride and you had me completely hooked. This is incredibly well written and I enjoyed it immensly! And I am almost as sad as Sakura for having to part with the girls. I love that you gave each girl their unique personality and did not just treat them as unimportant side characters. You are an amazing writer and I hope you never lose the joy in writing and creating! All the best wishes 3

This is a really good story. It may be taking a while for the storm to really progress but like, I’m enjoying it a lot. Haha. I’m happy there’s so many more chapters to go!D

Jesus Christ this is a good story. I got so friggen lost in it I just realized it’s 3:15 fuckin am. Fuck me. I’m supposed to be fixing my sleep schedule. I will be drinking beverages with caffeine tomorrow... as I continue reading this story.

LAWD. That was just hot and beautiful.

Another beautiful fic by you. One of the longest one I have read, and proably the most emotional one. Seriously the waves of emotions from sweet, funny, serious, anger and bliss were driving me crazy. But it just made the novella much more exciting to read. Again. you did a great job developing the story, a nice change of pace from the one-shots. You done it so well that Kakashi x Sakura's relationship felt to genuine, lust-filled at most, but also some sweet-sweet fluff. The mystery had me at the edge. I didn't know what to think when they finally uncovered the dark truth. Like damn! Overall I love it and great job again. Totally worth the read!

Only critic would be some very rare grammar errors. But not that distracting from the story. The fight scenes were OK but could be a bit more engaging (the lemon scenes were just wonderful!). I felt the ending could have been pushed out to another chapter for more romance but that's just a personal preference.

Another beautiful fic by you. One of the longest one I have read, and proably the most emotional one. Seriously the waves of emotions from sweet, funny, serious, anger and bliss were driving me crazy. But it just made the novella much more exciting to read. Again. you did a great job developing the story, a nice change of pace from the one-shots. You done it so well that Kakashi x Sakura's relationship felt to genuine, lust-filled at most, but also some sweet-sweet fluff. The mystery had me at the edge. I didn't know what to think when they finally uncovered the dark truth. Like damn! Overall I love it and great job again. Totally worth the read!

Only critic would be some very rare grammar errors. But not that distracting from the story. The fight scenes were OK but could be a bit more engaging (the lemon scenes were just wonderful!). I felt the ending could have been pushed out to another chapter for more romance but that's just a personal preference.

The best fic EVER! Thank you so much for this. Keep going! xx

This was truly amazing to read. You are a great writer and holy shit. I have so many emotions about this. I loved their cupplings and how you wrote everything. Thank you so much for killing those awful people, though I do wish they were more gruesome deaths. Especially the owner of the club. Fuck that guy. No not fuck, castrate, that's the word I wanted.
The girls were amazing I loved them,you made me feel for them and want them to be happy. I'm so glad they stayed together, it would have broke my heart of they didn't. Also I love that they made a restaurant. I hope juu comes back to it one day to work as security.
I was kinda of hoping Naruto and them would show upon the middle of a performance, cause that sounds hilarious. However I am much happier with how you had them enter, and the girls dancing for fun.
Sasuke pissed me off so badly I physically negatively reacted. My roommate even asked why my lip was twitching and I looked murderous. Sasuke was in character and I disliked him as much as I did in the show. I was honestly afraid you would have him force himself on Sakura. He was acting like he might. Though I would have liked to see Sakura punch his lights out, I'm glad none of that happened.
Thank you for writing this and sharing your gift with words with us all.
Amazing. Really.