Reviews for Stripped Bare |
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petitcerise chapter 26 . 11/3/2018 I liked a lot your story, you're a good writer. Also I think you could publish this like a book just adapting new characters. It is a dark fic, all the rape stuff and girl trade was pretty dark, but I liked how you developped it. I liked the smut scenes and the dancing scenes too, but I feel you could improve the action scenes, it felt too quickly and easy solved the hole Sakura rescue thing. Also I didn't liked that Naruto was sometimes so stupid, I do liked he caring for Sakura before the mission. Anyway I enjoyed reading you, thanks for a good story. |
Seishisui chapter 16 . 10/29/2018 wow... finally xD |
Pumpkin Adam chapter 19 . 10/16/2018 And the Sickest Author Award of the year goes to ... J-Pop, ladies and gentleman! You probably not gonna see this, but, I just didn't scream because it's late and my parents are sleeping, but OMG what a chapter! Tsurenai... I would never thought that. "Robot girls", I hope Kakashi remember that. What about Inner Sakura? Where is she? |
AnneElizabethBee chapter 26 . 10/14/2018 Oh my, this is just pure gold! I wasn't a fan of KakaSaku. In fact, I used to find it weird. But the way you wrote and the way you built their relationship completely overtook me! This fanfic is so delicious and heart warming! I love the slow build! You acknowledged how weird it initially was, letting both Sakura and Kakashi doubt what was building between them. I think this is important because you connect with doubtful readers, like me. I second guessed their pairing and the main characters share the sentiment. But then slowly, the characters and the readers change their minds after every hot scene! The lap dance, the strip tease, the next lap dance, the massage.. all of it slowly changed the nature of the relationship between Sakura and Kakashi. It used to be weird for me because Kakashi knew Sakura as a little girl. But those sexually charged moments totally blurred the lines. It made us realize that Kakashi is still a hot, sexy, and panty dropping man while Sakura is an enchanting and naturally desirable woman. So why shouldn't it work? I love that there was so much emotion in the scenes. They may be lusting hard, but it was always with meaning. Kakashi always looked at Sakura completely, how she is with and without makeup, acknowledging her innocence and her new found confidence at the same time. It made me root for the couple so much more, more than the fubu level. Mind you I am a hardcore SasuSaku fan, but in this story, I was cursing Sasuke to the tenth hell for making his move and trying to sabotage them, I cheered vindictively when he accidentally got Sakura and Kakashi together instead. That was how awesome you wrote! You made me drop my favorite ship for a ship I never liked before. This was a sweet change for me. I thank you, dear author, for making me see the light on this pair. |
Dame en Rouge chapter 26 . 10/13/2018 Its 2018 and here i am enjoying such a perfect work. Thank you very much, u r amazing, girl! |
nerdymom827 chapter 26 . 9/26/2018 Bravo, this was a fantastic read! Thank you! |
Guest chapter 26 . 9/18/2018 This is one of my favourite fics I've ever read, it's so well written, I got ridiculously emotional invested. During the time I first read it, I went to sleep until maybe 4am because it was so good, I didn't want to stop reading, and even after I finished it, I was still excited about it, it made me so much happy. I read it in June and I randomly remember pieces of it and get excited, so I come back here and read it all over again, and feel every emotion like it's the first time, my eyes have been blessed that I came across this fic! Thank you so much ! |
sophie-the-duchess chapter 2 . 8/31/2018 I'm hooked so far! Your writing is incredible, and I love how intuitive you are as a writer, throwing in little tidbits about the difference in work between male and female ninjas and how Sakura grew her hair out since she no longer sees daily combat. I can't wait to read the rest! |
xcherryblossom18097 chapter 25 . 8/25/2018 It's been a long time since you've finished this fanfic but I've recently stumbled upon it last month and read it twice already. I know it's a long shot since you're probably not going to see it since I've seen that you are no longer be on fanfiction anymore, but I just wanted to get this off my chest and say that I sincerely cannot get enough of your writing. You've written such a beautiful story and able to thoroughly describe how both Kakashi and Sakura were feeling throughout the whole story. From the beginning to the end, I fell in love with the way that you had the characters fall in love. There were so many plot twists and foreshadowing, and you've given your readers with such a built up that when a situation finally happens it still was able to surprise me. There were many moments where I squealed from feeling too happy for the heroes in this story. I hope that maybe one day that you will continue your writing, and I wish you the very best with whatever you are doing now! |
Guest chapter 26 . 7/27/2018 Omg hands down one of my favorite stores |
Burnehn chapter 26 . 7/14/2018 oh heck to the yeah, I love that the title is in the ending, that you gave it another meaning the the obvious one. Thank you veeery much for taking the time to finish this marvelously original story. |
Guest chapter 9 . 7/8/2018 Omg this chapter was so hot! I can’t wait for more! |
Burnehn chapter 25 . 7/9/2018 wowzer, i cant believe theres only one chapter left... and wtf is that punk Uchiha planning? (also, him imagining life with sakura and the subtle detail of him telling her to do ashe would like it was marvelous. a nice "he doesnt love her like that".) |
Tokuariko chapter 1 . 7/3/2018 I love how you word things. And how you want the readers to see it. Even during the lemons. It’s absolutely perfect. I love your writing style. |
Burnehn chapter 19 . 7/3/2018 THAT PUNK. Comeuppance, Sakura! And Kakashi TT Man, the poor guy. I'm half expecting Naruto and Sasuke to storm in guns blazing and just flail or something |