Reviews for Stripped Bare |
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Burnehn chapter 18 . 7/3/2018 I am at long last caught up! |
Burnehn chapter 15 . 7/1/2018 ah... now I remember why I blamed Tsurenai |
Burnehn chapter 14 . 7/1/2018 my bet is that yellow is Dajaku's son or has some form of blackmail over him. cause I feel like the pimp is in on it, but not necessarily by choice |
katamari157 chapter 1 . 7/1/2018 For me, the crucial scene is the paper airplane. thank you for this powerful journey with these two characters. |
Burnehn chapter 10 . 6/19/2018 there's like 6 kinds of frustration going on here, beating the pair around the head like hilariously sinister bats |
Burnehn chapter 8 . 6/18/2018 itd be funny if the other girls started to think Kakashi was the culprit, what with all the intense staring lol |
Burnehn chapter 7 . 6/18/2018 Well that was a character introduction I certainly did NOT remember in the later chapters last time around. its early on and you already got him in the cast. |
Burnehn chapter 6 . 6/18/2018 Sakura is like a rpg main character xDgoing around and getting backstories like a pro |
PurpleQueen0728 chapter 1 . 6/18/2018 Absolutely amazing! I don't even know what else to say just amazing! |
Burnehn chapter 5 . 6/17/2018 I stopped around chapter 20 on my first read through and never got around to finishing it, but I'm rereading now with every intention of doing so and I would just like to say: I remember being utterly convinced that Tsurenai was responsibme and I am now convinced(for some reason, despite only being on ch 6) that shes AN INNOCENT SOUL WHO JUST NEEDS SOME TLC. All caps required. Again, not sure why I think this this time around. the only thing I remember is the heated KS scenes and Mr. McCreepy Pants and the fact that I literally accused every character of being evil at some point. |
sailormoonie17 chapter 26 . 5/29/2018 This. Was. Amazing! I am so, so glad that you took the time and effort to write this! Thank you! I do think a little bit of Sakura and Kakashi's was gratuitous, and Kakashi was a little irresponsibly horny sometimes (He's not a teenager anymore! He has more experience in every sense of the word!), but this is FANfiction lol. Those are just my personal things. Really, I can't say anything negative. This was one of the best fanfictions I've ever read! Realistic characterization, engaging plot, convincing problem and solution, good writing. It was amazing! Haha, I could go on, but I'll stop... On another note, I thought the scene with Sasuke was gonna get a little... dangerous. I'm glad that's not the direction it went! Although I wouldn't have been too surprised, unfortunately. He struck me as very entitled and possibly dangerous at the end. :/ |
sailormoonie17 chapter 25 . 5/29/2018 UGH. Sasuke is getting worse! |
sailormoonie17 chapter 24 . 5/29/2018 I find it really annoying that Kakashi constantly thinks he's no good for Sakura (although I still think he should've kept things in his pants a little more) and deciding what is good for Sakura or not. Can't she decide who she's involved with? Man, I love him and I think he's great in many ways, but he's right: when it comes to Sakura he makes no rational decisions. Also, f* Sasuke. Like seriously. Do you maybe have a vendetta against him? |
sailormoonie17 chapter 23 . 5/29/2018 Ah, some things were resolved more quickly than expected! Honestly, I'm so, so thankful though, because I don't think I could have taken much more suspense. This has seriously been one of the most suspenseful fanfics I have ever read. Great job! |
sailormoonie17 chapter 21 . 5/29/2018 Honestly, this was a really hard chapter to read. I almost teared up at the end thinking about ALL the girls and their situation. I don't want to assume a happy ending, so I'm preparing myself. It's a bit upsetting to say the least. |