I am at long last caught up!

ah... now I remember why I blamed Tsurenai

my bet is that yellow is Dajaku's son or has some form of blackmail over him. cause I feel like the pimp is in on it, but not necessarily by choice

For me, the crucial scene is the paper airplane. thank you for this powerful journey with these two characters.

there's like 6 kinds of frustration going on here, beating the pair around the head like hilariously sinister bats

itd be funny if the other girls started to think Kakashi was the culprit, what with all the intense staring lol

Well that was a character introduction I certainly did NOT remember in the later chapters last time around. its early on and you already got him in the cast.

Sakura is like a rpg main character xDgoing around and getting backstories like a pro

Absolutely amazing! I don't even know what else to say just amazing!

I stopped around chapter 20 on my first read through and never got around to finishing it, but I'm rereading now with every intention of doing so and I would just like to say: I remember being utterly convinced that Tsurenai was responsibme and I am now convinced(for some reason, despite only being on ch 6) that shes AN INNOCENT SOUL WHO JUST NEEDS SOME TLC. All caps required.

Again, not sure why I think this this time around. the only thing I remember is the heated KS scenes and Mr. McCreepy Pants and the fact that I literally accused every character of being evil at some point.

This. Was. Amazing! I am so, so glad that you took the time and effort to write this! Thank you! I do think a little bit of Sakura and Kakashi's was gratuitous, and Kakashi was a little irresponsibly horny sometimes (He's not a teenager anymore! He has more experience in every sense of the word!), but this is FANfiction lol. Those are just my personal things. Really, I can't say anything negative. This was one of the best fanfictions I've ever read! Realistic characterization, engaging plot, convincing problem and solution, good writing. It was amazing! Haha, I could go on, but I'll stop...
On another note, I thought the scene with Sasuke was gonna get a little... dangerous. I'm glad that's not the direction it went! Although I wouldn't have been too surprised, unfortunately. He struck me as very entitled and possibly dangerous at the end. :/

UGH. Sasuke is getting worse!

I find it really annoying that Kakashi constantly thinks he's no good for Sakura (although I still think he should've kept things in his pants a little more) and deciding what is good for Sakura or not. Can't she decide who she's involved with? Man, I love him and I think he's great in many ways, but he's right: when it comes to Sakura he makes no rational decisions.
Also, f* Sasuke. Like seriously. Do you maybe have a vendetta against him?

Ah, some things were resolved more quickly than expected! Honestly, I'm so, so thankful though, because I don't think I could have taken much more suspense. This has seriously been one of the most suspenseful fanfics I have ever read. Great job!

Honestly, this was a really hard chapter to read. I almost teared up at the end thinking about ALL the girls and their situation. I don't want to assume a happy ending, so I'm preparing myself. It's a bit upsetting to say the least.