This is one of my favorite fanfic, considering I have read it more times than I can count.

feminine arousal smells musty not spicy. fix that.

I don't actually think sai is better than sakura at anything

I guess I just couldn't wait to review your story till I finished it. I have just been dyeing to tell you what an amazing writer you are. I can see every thing that is happening and could just picture every little detail though it certainly does not move to slow as it is written at just the right speed. I love it and honestly think you should consider writing for a career. I would love to read your books and stories.

Even though i am a sasusaku lover...the pure heat and and allure of kakasaku lures me in sometimes and this one is by far one of the best i have read...the only one coming close to mildly topping it was a lovely little fanfic called " Double edged sword" thank you for sharing your gift with us and please open your mind to a sasusaku fanfiction penned by you...i know it would be really hot!

I read this story for the first time a few years ago and just spent the pasts couple days rereading it. I like it a lot. I think the characters are well-developed and the relationship between Kakashi and Sakura is so passionate and loving. It's a pleasure to read. The friends that she makes are also charming and sweet and I'm glad that everyone gets a happy ending. Except for Sasuke, I guess, but he's so obnoxious and selfish (as he is in canon). Anyway, it's been a long time since you finished this and I don't think you post things to this site anymore, but I wanted to say thanks for writing this. It was a pleasure to read.

i... LOVED... this! this is the first KalshiSakura fanfic i read and i must say it's made me enjoy the pairing even more

your story making is quite impressive as, although you have some spelling errors here and there, but i got so stuck onto the story i hardly noticed them. this story has captivated me for almost a week of just pure reading material. i really did enjoy this fanfic!

Kakashi here becomes pretty OOC.. The plot kind of strays off from here since kakasaku is too into themselves here .. But im so interested in what happens when they encounter the enemy!

Loved it! :)

It was beautiful omg .

Like I read your warning and honestly thought it couldn't be all that bad but after reading this I'm beyond shocked I just feel so angry that it has to happen like why why why, ! But my thoughts despite the obvious disbelief is that this was daring and edge gripping I gotta way it was actually good, for the story to have such a twist was just so well executed that I'm still awed, honestly good job the fact that it evoked such feelings from me is a testimony that it was really really good

This was amazing. Thank you for the hard, excellent job.

I just read this in one sitting! Why was this not canon? I love it. You are amazing! Thank you!

Dear J-Pop Princess,

I remember several years ago when i first discovered the Kakashi and Sakura pairing in fanfiction and i instantly fell in love with it, religiously ready whatever fanfics i could get my hand on not just at home but in college as well. I was constantly being asked to put my phone away by the teachers because i was reading in class and another time i had my phone taken off me and i had to return to college at the end of the day to get it back. But rarely in all of that time since then have i found a fanfic quite like this one. I keep coming back here again and again every few months just to re-read the astonishingly detailed plot that you created. I want to say how good it is, the way you describe the longing that Kakashi feels for Sakura and the jealousy that Sasuke-teme finally feels for Sakura after her transformation (referencing when at the beginning she was shy and timid but by the end she was a woman). I would say all of this but i know i don't need to, you know how good this fanfic is when over 3,500 people review it and more have favorited it.

I pray to God that you don't decide to stop writing because if that happened, i don't know what would happen to us.

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Pewdian

wowww I should confess that I read this story in two days lol and you wrote it in two years and half.. almost there! well I I tell you that is one of my favorites fics and the best of kakasaku that I've read! thanks so much for your patience and imagination to finish it! kisses bye bye